This is good.

Definitely worth going back and editing- for the spelling mistakes.

Other than that, this is really good. You can imagine this girl writing furiously on a note pad. I think many people can relate to this kind of confusion. It has a lot of truth to it. Sure it's not a regular story, more like a monologue- but shmeh. Regular gets old fast.

Good job.

x reeka

This was so pure and raw. I kind of felt like an intruder. Like I was reading a diary, doing something I shouldn't do.

It's always easy commenting from the sidelines, so I won't give my 2 cents. Besides, who really wants "advice" from a total stranger.

I hope writing your frustration off was theraputical. :)

that was really hard to read, but thank you.

Wow, this just speaks for itself. Wow. Damn, this is powerful, makes me want to cry.

It's very emotional, very raw, and I think it works very well. I bet their are many out there who could relate very well to this piece.

girl, either you move on or you tell him. end of story. but just reliving the tmes you guys had and wallow will just make yu depresses. its what i think, you do what you choos, but the same thing hppened to me and movin on is ok.