Reviews for unwrapped
alwaysautumn chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
This is good.

Definitely worth going back and editing- for the spelling mistakes.

Other than that, this is really good. You can imagine this girl writing furiously on a note pad. I think many people can relate to this kind of confusion. It has a lot of truth to it. Sure it's not a regular story, more like a monologue- but shmeh. Regular gets old fast.

Good job.

x reeka
koerle chapter 2 . 2/19/2009
This was so pure and raw. I kind of felt like an intruder. Like I was reading a diary, doing something I shouldn't do.

It's always easy commenting from the sidelines, so I won't give my 2 cents. Besides, who really wants "advice" from a total stranger.

I hope writing your frustration off was theraputical. :)
someonenotreal chapter 2 . 1/1/2009
that was really hard to read, but thank you.
Da Vinci at Work chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
Wow, this just speaks for itself. Wow. Damn, this is powerful, makes me want to cry.
Hannah chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
It's very emotional, very raw, and I think it works very well. I bet their are many out there who could relate very well to this piece.
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
girl, either you move on or you tell him. end of story. but just reliving the tmes you guys had and wallow will just make yu depresses. its what i think, you do what you choos, but the same thing hppened to me and movin on is ok.