Hot pants and Sassafras, that was a good chapter!

M... Sounds like a good soup too..

When do we get to see what happens to Billiam next, eh?

That guys an asshole.

Take your punctuation back home to your momma, college boy! I bet she tells you your special.

Well,

You're not!

Awesome story. Keep on Barding Billiam! Godspeed to you.

The grammer and punctuation need a little work though.

Sorry, but you need to work on your grammar and punctuation. I only had to look at it for a minute to see that you left out a ton of punctuation. There are also some spelling issues, and the story seems a little disjointed.

A sophisticated look at barding, and all it entells. Quite so!