Reviews for He Bled Sentences
HelloBilby chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
this isn't a mess. it's really good.

and kind of creepy, with the whole, 'bleeding words' thing.

but it's really good
PadfootForever chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I thought this was fantastic. The metaphoric blood was brilliant, really.
Subconscious-Flirt chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
...This was a bit confusing...I wasn't sure whether anyone was actually bleeding, what with all the metaphorical blood and such...
CaFFy chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
Aw. So, I totally gave you the name Joel. Because you used that name, I liked the story. :D (And yay to "corny bullshit"
Rrrrachel chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I was confused a lot, but in the end I liked the overall story. XD It wasn't terrible. :D At least you TRIED for her birthday ._. I didn't want to bother because I knew I'd give up.. T_T *feels mean*
SerialXLain chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
Dude. You told me there would be dead people and murderers. I see no dead people and I see no makers of dead people.

But that's okay. I still really liked this.

It weird and poetic and I like Reed. And the name Reed. I also like how the beginning is repeated at the end but they sort of switch roles. TRICKY TRICKY TRICKY. FAIRUZA. BALK. BITCH.

I love you. :D Thanks for this. I hope it wasn't too painful. xD I don't really get where you got this idea...but I ejoyed it. :)