This was so cuuuute! The last part was pretty funny lmao

Lol! This was great. I loved this little story.

I really love the three way relationship because I always thought that if people are going to have multiple relationships, they should at least love everyone involved.

Great read ;)

hee hee hee this is fantastic!

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lool...normally am not into threesome - but i really enjoyed this

This story was soo good! You should really think of making a story/chapter series of their adventures

really cute one-shot. bravo!

Very Cute!David is absolutely adorable and I really liked the emotion felt through the characters.

It was very interesting but I couldn't help but hope it had more to it. There are plenty of things you can continue with. The vamps meeting allysia, all three going out in public, meeting work mates, them getting david to model for him. Things like that.

Beral and Alaster are awesome, and David is awesome-er; together, they are a trifecta of awesome-ness )

I like how you use Nick as a comic relief in this with the biscotti and the very last line. Made the story all the more memorable considering you made me laugh and VERY interested in the story itself at the same time. I actually had fun reading this rather than straight out smut or reading some emo crap. I think with the stories you write, I shall now add you as a favorite author. Your writing style is amazing.

i really enjoyed the light heartedness of this story. wtf is second chapter? lol

I read this awhile back and really enjoyed it! The characters are very likable :D

:)

thats so funny I love it and I think there should be a second instalment