Reviews for Anger
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
"Pint up anger burns inside"... did you mean pent?

I like the bolding, but the fact that the to was split up seemed a bit odd, not sure how you could fix that though.

The description of anger was really powerful and well done. Nice piece.
Blackened Blood chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Its very strong in the message and I love it in every single way... it was amazing how put in a secret message: Never Meant To Hurt You
instantramen chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Awesome. Secret messages ftw.

I liked this a lot, easy to relate to, we've all unintentionally hurt someone, and well written.

Wow. My sentence structure is horrid. Sorry I'm uglying up your reviews.
Candiferous chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
i love secret messages! this is good. says a lot with few words. i can just imagine you (yeah... i have no clue what you look like) holding your head.