|Reviews for Death's Deal|
| bridgettblah chapter 20 . 9/25
That was...NOT the ending I was expecting...oh my god.
I wanna fight Death. I wanna fight him so bad.
Honestly okay, that was a good ending. Not the one I was expecting at allll, but it was good. Really good. This whole thing was good. Alright. I dont even know why Im writing this, coz ur bio says its an abandoned account. But whatever, I need to vent.
I wanna know what that motherfucker was thinking while playing his 'game'. Altho I think that would be really difficult to write, I mean. Hes a cruel god. Of death. Like, he is worse than a sociopath. No emotions at all.
That just seems to hard.
Alright okay I think I'm done.
No wait, im not.
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. FUCK DEATH.
okay now im done.
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/11
This felt scarily realistic
I loved it and i know that somewhere in me i was dissapointed in the ending but it felt right this way
This isn't criticism
Probably my FAVOURITE story currently.
Im definetly reccomending this to people but I REALLY GOD DAMN (lol) WANTED THEM TO END UO TOGETHER
(Ever considered an alternate ending :)!
| The Soul of Silver chapter 20 . 5/4
... This is pure... I can't even find the words to describe how amazing this is, I've barely read the ending and I'm already in LOVE with this! You are truly the greatest author I've ever seen.
| ajachowder1 chapter 20 . 4/9
ah just Shakespeare. A true tragedy where everyone dies.
I enjoyed this for the most part, wasn't expecting the sad ending though but whatever. :)
Thanks for the read!
| Zeela chapter 20 . 7/15/2014
Wow. That was amazing. It was so refreshing to see a God act like a God, not like some mortal like in other stories. It was realistic. Thank you for writing this story.
| Xena Fox chapter 20 . 4/7/2014
This is the best story I have ever read on FP. I actually cried when Faith was rejected by Death but the ending did make sense, even if it was the saddest thing EVER. Thank you for writing this story, it was awesome! :)
| Dominique Diane chapter 20 . 4/6/2014
This story made me shiver, really. And I loved it.
| IamLoveBug chapter 20 . 2/26/2014
WOW! I loved this story!
| KimiEvenStar chapter 20 . 2/6/2014
You know what...I like this story a lot! Not a conventional type of love story. I like that. It's true the way humans love, even if it's not returned. In a way also kind of a happy ending because Faith is back with the family she loves :). Their deaths however were sad, as death always is.
| subpet chapter 1 . 1/30/2014
ooh! this is promising to be a very good start! :) leery of pressing the next button though, cause i've got uni tomorrow and if i continue reading i might not stop. :/ but yeah, definitely going to read this. :) grades and homework be damned. lol
| Guest chapter 20 . 9/21/2013
Great story. It definitely brought emotions out of me :')
| KristenWenst68 chapter 20 . 9/21/2013
No happy ending? It's still a good story, just quite unresolved in my opinion.
| cantremembermylogininfo chapter 20 . 9/18/2013
The ending was beautiful, I loved it. I read this sorry when you initially wrote ita few years ago when it was on your other page, and it still is one of my favorites. You should never give up writing, it's something you're truly gifted at.
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 20 . 9/16/2013
Grrr! It's over! I wanted it to continue forever. So now she's dead and Death will need to find someone else to play with.
This was an amazing story. I just can't believe it's over.
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 16 . 9/16/2013
Aww man, that sucks. It makes sense though but dang! It just sucks. What did He expect from a teenaged girl?