I really wish you would redo this story, but I can understand about the reasons you stated for taking it down. I'm actually quite glad you left a reason when I was wanting to read it though, so thanks.

This was amazing. Loved the entire story. I definately can't wait to read the other two that you were planning to write to turn this into a trilogy. Great job! Renae :)

Hey there, I rilly love ur fiction! I read it 4 the first time! Guess what! I'm hooked on it! Rilly adore u (honestly) :)

Nice day,

Stacie Le

So I just read this whole story and now I need to know when the sequel is coming out. Im truely addicted and i have to know whats going to happen

The story is getting off topic O.o it was good before but im confuzed now

Nah. I understand. I can't wait till the sequel comes out. It was my pleasure to review.

-Sidhe

I absolutely adored this story. The only thing that I want to complain about is that there doesn't seem to be a sequel forthcoming. What happens when they find Gabby? Does Cassie get her prince back? The suspense is killing me. xD

Ms. Atwood's quite nice in her own way - I just don't see how she keeps the place dirty with all these 'servants in training' about the place!

I don't know who to be more angry with - Ced for not reading the second page and saving the brush or Leeva for actually breaking the brush.

Very rushed with Caelan - I like that he has mood swings though. Makes him more real.

Hi, thanks for the review reply. I hope I wasn't too critical - I know that I can be as I'm dead set on details.

Just want to let you know that considering you wrote it for NaNoWriMo, I think you did a great job.

I re-write would do it the world of good though. I mean the timing is weird. Like She's known Caelan (love his name) for a day and she compares him to servant boy and something else as well. It would have more impact if she noted it while he was acting like that.

As for the world. I might complain, but I do actually love it. it's just the people who don't fit to well, I see what you mean about going for the Knights Tale 'look' I really think you can make that work. If it were my Project, I'd keep the modern English, but make them so things in a little more reserved old fashioned manner - since you've got the whole reputation thing going on.

To answer your question (in the A.N.) I like Caelan, he comes across as being both stern and frivolous. I little bit Rude and not at all Princely.

Gareth's my favorite character, because he's the most real.

I feel sorry for Leeva, I mean she doesn't know how to act she's a product of her misfortune - having a mother like that. She might have tried to get along with servants if people she admired did it, obviously Gabby is someone she wants to know.

I found in your writing that you tend to focus on two characters at a time, so when Ced, Gabby, Leeva and Caelan where together Leeva sort of disapeared and Gabby was muffled.

Anyway I don't want to rant. I love your story.

Keep up the good work :-)

Rebecca.

Very nice, just a few points if I can get them out straight.

I feel like your plot would have benefited greatly if you hadn't made Gallid/Gareth confess so soon. I mean it would be nice if they did go to a servants party and maybe make a week go by. there was a lot of potential there.

Corsets actually used to break womens' ribcage. I know it's horrible but you've painted a very blurry picture of the time set you're in. It's a bit of a collage of historical, otherworldly scenery with modern language and even though how you write is pleasant. The way your characters speak isn't. This cocktail just doesn't work for me. It's neither seamless nor is it flattering. It could work beautifully but at the moment it isn't.

I wouldn't want to be kicked out of such an interesting house. But I wouldn't be able to hold my tounge given her stepmothers words.

Aw sweet

xx

Wow, that was an excellent conclusion to the story. I loved it.

Sorry for taking so long to review. I never forgot this story though :)

Continue to write, because you really have something going for you here.

~Carm~

I loved it thats all I can say. I did think that ced fell in love too fast besides that I can read 6 times if I wanted to because thats how good it is.