Reviews for Christmas
having reached closure chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
hey there, long time no talk. :) remember me?

you continue to amaze me with your writing, just so you know.

many wonderful summer days,

naomi
Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Really nice! The dialogue between the two characters here was realistic; it flowed well and seemed with pretense. It's really the dialogue here that made it work, and the narrator added a nice flavor to it that kept me reading. I loved it.

- Koki