...you took the rest of the story down? i suppose you have your reasons and while i really would love to read this again, i do appreciate that i did get to read it and enjoy it fully a few years ago. it was expertly written, as far as i can remember. i wish you all the best.

I have always loved this story along with your other one but what happened to it? It just disappeared... :(

This story is really good! The characters are lovable, yet flawed like actual people. As for new story ideas, I have a few that I can't seem to implement on my own, if you're willing to PM me.

Pretty nice work. : ) I enjoyed the tale.

Thanks for posting!

I know your question about a possible sequel was about mmm ... 4 years ago? But I loved Reilley and I wanted to know his love story. Also the sneak peek at the Queen's peculiar personality was amazing. Maybe you could do a love story between them? Reilley x the Queen!
Best wishes and keep writing.

Wowza, that was the best fiction press story I have ever read!
THAT WAS AMAZING!
Well done with it.
-Cookie Seller.

Well-I had half expected you to have Melinda make Luke to work for her forgiveness like majority of the stories I have read BUT here again I have to say 'THIS IS A VERY VERY UNIQUE' STORY! I absolutely adored it and I am hoping for alot more from you! Either the continuation of 'Forever Looking' or another Vampire or Werewolf one-just anything-your writing is out and out FANTABULOUS! Yes I know that isn't a real word but one works for me regarding your writing and your stories!

DAMN IT GIRL-YOU KILLED ME HERE!

AGAIN YOU THREW ME FOR A LOOP! I never would have thought of Luke being a jerk EVEN if he had ended up falling in love with her-HE IS STILL A JERK! Now a part of me would rather see her with Reilly but I will definitely hold my opinion until I see how you have Luke making it up to her.

YOU ARE JUST PLAIN EVIL HERE Cirya-but I really love evil! Now we have another quandary going and like they and you have said 'curiosity killed the cat' and I say 'suspense is killing this cat'-LOL! You are beyond amazing!

Dower? You never said Braden's last name that I remember. Why would they want him? Oh she hasn't had a great day you are right-poor girl. I cannot imagine how Darcy and Adriana are going to feel now that she is missing and after everything else that happened. You have a knack at instigating ALOT of EMOTIONS into this story and I ALWAYS CRAVE THEM-ASTOUNDING!

Ok this is short and not so sweet-WHAT THE BLOODY HELL!

Well now I am feeling a bit of an ass here but I am also confused. What is up with Sardis? I also get the feeling that Melinda may not actually be her parents child or the twins sibling but that is just my take on it and am probably wrong. A part of me feels maybe Sardis is her father and for some unknown reason she is kept a secret-what a tangled web you have wove here!

DAMN IT Cirya-Sardis of all people I thought would understand this. I even had the impression that he might welcome a sort of truce it might offer and new take on this matter when he spoke to her about letting her figure it out-I DID NOT EXPECT THIS! Yes I like Reilly and I think they make WONDERFUL friends but I really really like Luke and Melinda as a couple. Now with this development, I cannot wait to see how you have it played out!

I COULDN'T help but grin through this whole chapter-IT WAS PERFECTION PERSONIFIED!