Reviews for The Night's StarCrossed Story
featherstone13 chapter 16 . 5/17/2009
i like it love the drama

feathers
MBDS18 chapter 8 . 5/15/2009
Love this story! You are a great writer.
MBDS18 chapter 7 . 5/14/2009
Loving this story!
Emma2Ann12 chapter 16 . 5/14/2009
Oh its getting really good! I dont think Luke is moving too fast and she should just stick with him! lol Keep up the good work and please hurry with the next one!

later

Em
Yelena Nightingale chapter 16 . 5/13/2009
o.o...it said i reviewed on chapter two and on chapter one...it was actually chapter 15 and 16...lol. my computer is being wierd...-.-"
Yelena Nightingale chapter 2 . 5/13/2009
:O OMG! Luke actually kissed her! xDD Love it! But I'm not liking Sardis very much right now. -sigh- I really hope it all works out for them. Update soon!
MarloCarlo10 chapter 16 . 5/13/2009
I think his drama was not overdramatic but just right, although it sucks big time!

Great but sad chapter at the end :( I hope Luke and her don't listen...but I think Mel will :(
Isabellamarie chapter 16 . 5/13/2009
Aw I hope luke makes her feel better. I think there going at a great pace and there so cute together. Can't wait to read the next!
leckie chapter 16 . 5/13/2009
omg i so cant wait for more its so exciteing upload as soon as yhoo can xx
Fantasy Loremaster chapter 16 . 5/13/2009
It has been quite a long time since I was last on this site, and I must say I started reading your story on a whim. Imagine my suprise when i found myself completely captivated and drawn in.

I love Luke's easy going attitude and I will admit, I honestly wasn't too pleased with Melinda's character at first, but I guess she grew on me.

And what is up with Sardis? He's not striking me as a father figure. Don't get me wrong, he seems to fill that role, but it's off. I guess we'll find out as the story progresses.

Please update soon.

F.L.
aflores90 chapter 16 . 5/13/2009
I loved your soap opera teaser. Haha. The story was good too ;).
whisper-sweet-nothings chapter 16 . 5/13/2009
gah! Sardis is so mean! sighz. This seems a lot like romea and juliet, please don't say they both die at the end! You're awesome too! Update soons!

- Christina
Shadow Kissed Twilight chapter 15 . 5/11/2009
Aw! Yay! I don't know if I have told you this, but...

I lov-eth this story. :3
Yelena Nightingale chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
OMG I LOVE IT! x3 I love Lucas! Can't wait until you update!
Emma Gammon chapter 15 . 5/8/2009
lovely chapter xD I really am whining for the next part! w

I think you're doing a great job, both with writing and their relationship. Very real and tangible!
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