Reviews for The Night's StarCrossed Story
Shadow Kissed Twilight chapter 12 . 2/13/2009
Love it per usual. I liked how Luke pinned her against the snack wall. No escape from his questions in that situation. :) Another thing is that Mel gets more determined to keep him as a friend and not get caught, while Luke doesn't care about the consequences.

They are so oddly matched that it is perfectly imperfect.

Please update when you can and be safe!
whisper-sweet-nothings chapter 12 . 2/11/2009
:D:D:D this story is awesome! totally a new idea, its so good. I hope you update soon :P

anyways, if you ever get the time, please read my stories, and review them, tell me what you think so far, thanks!
StarDust1880 chapter 12 . 2/10/2009
Great chapter :) towards the end i was wondering if mel would scratch his neck and get away from him but oh well. I thought the end was funny. Earlier in the chapter there were some holes in the text so i suggest after you've finished the story go back and revise it. I think you have a great story line and it's very original. Your story does faintly remind me of Romeo and Juliet but it has a twist and it's not so cliche. Adios!
MarloCarlo10 chapter 12 . 2/9/2009
lol i see no mistakes. Love the story XD
Freddy Teddy chapter 12 . 2/8/2009
FINALLY! SHE ADMITS! YEAH! BUT HE'S STILL TAKING SOMEONE ELSE TO THE DANCE. BUT I THINK HE'LL GET REALLY JELIOUS! ITS BEAUTIFUL WHEN IT DOESN'T HAPPEN TO YOU, BUT DEADLY WHEN IT DOES. Sigh, i can't sleep, so i'm reading your fic. How sad...
pockets are my friends chapter 12 . 2/8/2009
Yay, they're talking again. More Luke please, lol. Uh, forgot who Cara was... doh!
Freddy Teddy chapter 5 . 2/8/2009
I story with Sardis would be great. Sorry I didn't review for the last few chapters. I was so caught up in the reading that I just went to the next chapter because I was so hooked.
Amarantis chapter 11 . 2/8/2009
I like the new characters you introduced. Mel, however, wins over the chef anytime.
Shadow Kissed Twilight chapter 11 . 1/28/2009
I liked the new characters you introduced. They both seem very interesting. :) The V-Day dance is certainly going to be... lively? Can't wait for the next chapter, but I suppose I will have to.

Please update when you can and be safe.
StarDust1880 chapter 11 . 1/19/2009
Hola :) You're story is awesome! I was recently yhink about it and when i got an alert i was very excited to read it again. I think cynthia is cool, i'm not sure of chef bradley- he didn't have a big part. But I see in the future luke fighting reily in a jealous passion XD sorry but yeah a big fight between them. -Afourletterlie-
xiia0moonlight chapter 11 . 1/19/2009
definitely chef bradley ! isn't it so cool to have some weres gene in you ? lols . and he's great with both vamps and weres . hehs . oh , and great chapter ya got here . love it loads .
wingsrookie chapter 11 . 1/18/2009
oh my gosh! You UPDATED! It's like a miracle! (sighs) now i'll probably have to wait another eternity to read the next chapter...oh how will I survive? You should update soon so I don't die of an ticipation.
pockets are my friends chapter 11 . 1/18/2009
Cynthia's ok. Sardis has something going on doesn't he. He seems suspicious to me... lol. I don't know what I'm talking about.
Amarantis chapter 10 . 12/31/2008
Lucas and Mel are so sweet together. :) And everything seems so fluent and natural.
xiia0moonlight chapter 10 . 12/25/2008
lols . great ending . i'll be anticipating the next chapter ya . cant wait to see how luke would react to reilly appearance . hehs .
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