Reviews for The Night's StarCrossed Story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it per usual. I liked how Luke pinned her against the snack wall. No escape from his questions in that situation. :) Another thing is that Mel gets more determined to keep him as a friend and not get caught, while Luke doesn't care about the consequences. They are so oddly matched that it is perfectly imperfect. Please update when you can and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D:D:D this story is awesome! totally a new idea, its so good. I hope you update soon :P anyways, if you ever get the time, please read my stories, and review them, tell me what you think so far, thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter :) towards the end i was wondering if mel would scratch his neck and get away from him but oh well. I thought the end was funny. Earlier in the chapter there were some holes in the text so i suggest after you've finished the story go back and revise it. I think you have a great story line and it's very original. Your story does faintly remind me of Romeo and Juliet but it has a twist and it's not so cliche. Adios! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol i see no mistakes. Love the story XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY! SHE ADMITS! YEAH! BUT HE'S STILL TAKING SOMEONE ELSE TO THE DANCE. BUT I THINK HE'LL GET REALLY JELIOUS! ITS BEAUTIFUL WHEN IT DOESN'T HAPPEN TO YOU, BUT DEADLY WHEN IT DOES. Sigh, i can't sleep, so i'm reading your fic. How sad... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, they're talking again. More Luke please, lol. Uh, forgot who Cara was... doh! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I story with Sardis would be great. Sorry I didn't review for the last few chapters. I was so caught up in the reading that I just went to the next chapter because I was so hooked. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the new characters you introduced. Mel, however, wins over the chef anytime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the new characters you introduced. They both seem very interesting. :) The V-Day dance is certainly going to be... lively? Can't wait for the next chapter, but I suppose I will have to. Please update when you can and be safe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hola :) You're story is awesome! I was recently yhink about it and when i got an alert i was very excited to read it again. I think cynthia is cool, i'm not sure of chef bradley- he didn't have a big part. But I see in the future luke fighting reily in a jealous passion XD sorry but yeah a big fight between them. -Afourletterlie- |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitely chef bradley ! isn't it so cool to have some weres gene in you ? lols . and he's great with both vamps and weres . hehs . oh , and great chapter ya got here . love it loads . |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh! You UPDATED! It's like a miracle! (sighs) now i'll probably have to wait another eternity to read the next chapter...oh how will I survive? You should update soon so I don't die of an ticipation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cynthia's ok. Sardis has something going on doesn't he. He seems suspicious to me... lol. I don't know what I'm talking about. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lucas and Mel are so sweet together. :) And everything seems so fluent and natural. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lols . great ending . i'll be anticipating the next chapter ya . cant wait to see how luke would react to reilly appearance . hehs . |