Reviews for The Night's StarCrossed Story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love it. Riley is going to make things even more interesting! Good job so far. If you are changing the dance to Valentine's day, you should re-check your wording. I caught that you let it slip into the word 'prom' in some parts. Anyway, please be safe and update when you can. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very well written! I really like the relationship between the two species. I'm werewolf fan, so I guess I'm rooting for Lucas. I had a dog named Luke...He had pretty blue eyes too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... I like it so far. And Reilly seems pretty chill, so right now I'm rooting for him. But I do like Lucas a lot too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) love love love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boo, I hate when guys do that... yea go talk to some bimbo just to make us jealous, bah! Lol. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I like everything so far. Can't wait for more. Though I did notice in one of the previous chapters were you wrote Darcy instead of Sardis... can't remember where though, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story, I love how you mix all these different personalities, no one is the same everyone is different. I hope luke gets together with melinda! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for the date and this was a really good chapter. Nice job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo! Wonderful update. :) This should be a very interesting next chapter. I am looking forward to it. :) Good luck with classes. Please update when you can and be safe. ~Shadow |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahaha she's starting to fall for him! interesting chapter so can't wait till next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it so far! Vampires and werewolves are my fixation right now and this story is simply fulfilling to that need. :) Good luck in college. Please update when you can and be safe. ~Shadow |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story so far. It's seriously awesome and I think you've done a great job so far. I think Luke and Mel are great characters and I can't wait for you to update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome start, can't wait to read more about luke and mel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay Luke to the rescue! wow scary about the other alpha but cool chapter nonetheless. continue to write! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh geez. REAL smooth, Luke. I really enjoy reading this. Your vocabluary is amazing! Some other vampire-werewolf stories I have read are very concise, unlike yours. About the Sardis story, I believe it would be very interesting. It could tell about how he acted younger, if he was blooded or born into vampirism, how he started his clan, that sort of thing. -was giving you ideas- Update soon please! -wolfgirl2.0 |