Reviews for The Night's StarCrossed Story
Shadow Kissed Twilight chapter 10 . 12/23/2008
I love it. Riley is going to make things even more interesting! Good job so far. If you are changing the dance to Valentine's day, you should re-check your wording. I caught that you let it slip into the word 'prom' in some parts.

Anyway, please be safe and update when you can. :)
Kuro-Kihaku chapter 10 . 12/23/2008
This is very well written! I really like the relationship between the two species. I'm werewolf fan, so I guess I'm rooting for Lucas. I had a dog named Luke...He had pretty blue eyes too!
pockets are my friends chapter 10 . 12/22/2008
Hm... I like it so far. And Reilly seems pretty chill, so right now I'm rooting for him. But I do like Lucas a lot too.
sooner or later its over chapter 9 . 12/14/2008
:) love love love this story.
pockets are my friends chapter 9 . 11/29/2008
Boo, I hate when guys do that... yea go talk to some bimbo just to make us jealous, bah! Lol. Can't wait for more.
pockets are my friends chapter 8 . 11/9/2008
Oh, I like everything so far. Can't wait for more. Though I did notice in one of the previous chapters were you wrote Darcy instead of Sardis... can't remember where though, lol.
KristinaGuzman chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
I love your story,

I love how you mix all these different personalities, no one is the same everyone is different.

I hope luke gets together with melinda!
AMM3485 chapter 7 . 8/17/2008
Can't wait for the date and this was a really good chapter. Nice job.
Shadow Kissed Twilight chapter 7 . 8/17/2008
Woo! Wonderful update. :) This should be a very interesting next chapter. I am looking forward to it. :)

Good luck with classes. Please update when you can and be safe.

~Shadow
Guacamole chapter 7 . 8/16/2008
ahaha she's starting to fall for him! interesting chapter so can't wait till next one!
Shadow Kissed Twilight chapter 6 . 8/11/2008
I love it so far! Vampires and werewolves are my fixation right now and this story is simply fulfilling to that need. :) Good luck in college.

Please update when you can and be safe.

~Shadow
AMM3485 chapter 6 . 8/7/2008
I absolutely love this story so far. It's seriously awesome and I think you've done a great job so far. I think Luke and Mel are great characters and I can't wait for you to update.
Capricia chapter 5 . 8/7/2008
awesome start, can't wait to read more about luke and mel.
Guacamole chapter 6 . 8/3/2008
yay Luke to the rescue! wow scary about the other alpha but cool chapter nonetheless. continue to write!
wolfgirl2.0 chapter 5 . 8/2/2008
Oh geez. REAL smooth, Luke. I really enjoy reading this. Your vocabluary is amazing! Some other vampire-werewolf stories I have read are very concise, unlike yours.

About the Sardis story, I believe it would be very interesting. It could tell about how he acted younger, if he was blooded or born into vampirism, how he started his clan, that sort of thing. -was giving you ideas-

Update soon please!

-wolfgirl2.0
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