your doing everything perfect with this story. lukes not going too fast-because believe me its been a long time...i dont know what deluding means...haha.. and sardis-is expected to respond that way even if it makes mel mad.

oh well.

i love this story

umm...you kept calling it prom /

just thought you should know.

but i love this story, anyway

I loved it, my heart almost beat out of my chest when I thought Luke was a fluke lol. Great work. can I put this on my C2

This story was very interesting :P

HI! :) i just wanted to say that i absolutely love your story. This is an awesome story and i'm glad i found it and was able to enjoy it. I hope that you will write many more of these awesome werewolf stories. I think that i actually enjoy werewolf stories better than vampire stories sometimes. (except Twilight which is pretty much all vampire) lol

Keep writing!

Haybell

Good ending, I'd say I can't wait for more, but its over, so that would be rather stupid.. I think if you're going to write another story, I'd be interested in knowing how the young queen came to be, I mean, she said she used to be a normal person. Anyway, good job,

Heather

I had had a theory that Benedict was his father, so I guess i was close, good twist.!

This is a good chapter, I had anticipated that something was going to happen soon, and I wasn't let down. Good job.

One thing I noticed now, and periodically throughout the book as well, was that in the beginning the name Farraday was spelt like that, but in other chapters it's spelt, Faraday, I just figured that it's something to look for if you review it again.

HA! I knew something would happen at the dance! Sorry for the outburst, I'll go back to reading, now.

I really like what I've read so far, but one thing caught my attenion, you said that Vampires don't sleep, they go into a semi-concious state, but that has been often called sleep in this chapter. I was just wondering, was it on purpose so the reader better understands what she's doing, or was it an accident? I tend to knit pick when I read things that I am really into and like, sorry if its annoying. Also, my favourite book is Pride and Prejudice.

YAY! You have finished!... And it was awesome! :D

I am still so in love with this story, and I am sure I will continue to be.

I say that you should do one of the 2-4 options and go for third person. Just because I don't know what else you have written... *scratches nose and looks away guilty*

Anyway, look forward to hearing from you in another story in the future! Until then, please be safe!

~Shadow

AHH! im going to go cry in my room! the story can't be over! i love it to much! i haven't ever been so upset that a book has ended until now! i would SERIOUSLY consider getting this published! best fictonpress story/whatever you call it ever!

omg. i sat and read this WHOLE thing today, and i loved it! im going to join u in the corner...haha. i shall read more of your works now D

I thought that was a really cute way to end the story. I still think you should have dragged out Mel and Luke's conflict a little longer, but it's all good. There were a few inconsistencies as well, but you can correct them if you edit it at a later date. And is writing action scenes not really your forte? It kinda seemed like it.

I vote for a werewolf story. And if you think you do well in first person, then go right ahead! Have you ever tried third person? You might find you like it. :)

I wish you luck in whatever else you plan to do.

oh my god it's over! and it had a wonderful ending! simply simply wonderful! i'm glad though, that mel chose to stay with luke becuase i would have cried if she hadn't. XD. and benedict isn't an asshole! surprising, but hey! everyone (most people) love surprises! as for a new story...i vote you write a werewolf story or a story about who knows what! XD.