A werewolf story sounds good! I never get sick of them

Holy. Crap.

I so totally loved it! I'm so sad to see it end but yet im so happy that it did! Yay you! You finished a story! I've started so many stories and have never been able to finish any of them. So now you get a gold star and a cookie! xD lol.

About the story...it would be awesome if it were about werewolves. I. Love. Werewolves. :DD

Oh and it doesnt matter if its first or third person. . I'll like it anyway you put it. You're an awesome writer, I cant wait until your next story!

:'( omg i just realized this is going to be my last review for this story...It's so sad! I wish i could extend this but i really dont have anything else to say. :( Ah well. I'll review on ur next story no matter what its about. :D

-Yelena Nightingale

AW. So sad that it's ending but so happy that it's ending! Haha. As my special prize, I think my opinion should matter the most ;). Write a werewolf story! Who doesn't love those?

I loved this story and i thought it was a great ending :)

kudos :))

you may write whatever you want, as long as you write! and write for yourself, don't write only what your readers want you to. you're the boss, you decide.

first person, third person, doesn't really matter for me, as long as it's not second person (yes, I've had the honor to read one of those horrible things)

aww that's a wonderful epilogue!

any chances of there being a sequel about their lives after marriage? (:

Congratulations..what a fantastic story this turned out to be!

Not only did thing work out with Lucas..but her family situation improved as well. I really like how much more loving Darcy was to her in the last couple of chapters :)

Look forward to more stories from you!

AH, that was good.

A little fast of an ending, but still well done :)

Now, as for the next thing...

I haven't see the other stories you've posted but working on them as well as or instead of a new story would be a good idea, as I'm just about to go have a look at them ;)

And I'm thinking maybe a totally new story about who knows what would be the way to go, since you just did vampires and werewolves together so something new and fresh would be interesting.

And I do enjoy first-person narratives, but at least with third-person we actually know what the other characters are thinking... maybe if you want to go for a whole new thing then third person would be a good idea, but if you want to stick with first person then I see no problem with it.

Werewolf or a totally new story!

This was such a great story, it's kinda sad that its done (

I think it depends on the story. I can never decide on POVs, I like both first and third...

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Great job!

AW Great chapter!

I absolutely LOVE this story! I'm so sad to see it end. But it had a great ending; Mel and Luke are perfect for eachother! :)

Must. Review. Now.

Wow! You have certainly been working! I missed 3 chapters when they came out.

The entire has changed. I never would have thought Luke to be a... spy of sorts. I just can't believe it. Then the confrontation, and he let her take blood... Oh!-the word! He said the word! And- and the whole sha-bam with Braden not being who he is and him killing Luke's Uncles' mate and Luke's Uncle killing Braden (or Dower's) father... and just wow!

I love how Luke was just sitting there in his apartment. Haha! Wag, Wag, Wag, Smirk... Pounce.

This is such an amazing story. Have I told you I loved it?

Please update when you can and be safe!

~SKT

Something Like That by Tim McGraw! That used to be on of my favorite songs! Good taste in music girl.

I live somewhere where the majority of the people are blonde. so I have to refrain from telling blonde jokes. :)

the ending was great! you could also say that Luke was grinning while thumping his tail on the floor.

hahaha no,I can't... blonde jokes are funny, but I'm a dark brunette, so yeah... a cliff hanger? not fuunny :( Update soon!

-christna