where's the next chapter? dont leave us hanging!

okay, im not exactly a bag of compliments, but WOW. that was great! please send the drawing to my email. you can expect me to read any and all of your future writings. i cant get over your talent. please write more. much ,much more. you should write published books. you have an admirer. well, thats all the praise i have for now. cya

So cute - I am not sure what to say at the moment...cute is all I'm getting...at a loss for words because the story is so great. :D

Really, it's a wonderful story(!) that needs to be updated pronto! {though I'm sure you know that :)} Loving the whole Stone/Kestrel thing- and the mistletoe- cuuttee. :p

*_* dude, I normally don't read original fics... but I did this and I'm in love... . I hope you plan on writing some more soon...

I love it! Kestrel is my kinda boy, going after Stone just like that _~ You must put the next part out soon _ and I want to see the pic!

_ I like. Write more!

Wow, Swyth-chan...I didnt knew, you also write original fics? I like this one. Wouldnt have expected Kestrel to be the tough guy who defeats Stone and than claims (grin) his prize. You said, you made a pic? Can you send it to me, please? (making puppy eyes at you) Oh, and you mentioned this your first original on ff...does it mean, you have others,too? Id like to read them, if you let me.

hm...I thought for a moment that you hadn't given Stone a gender, and I was hoping for him to be a girl...then I read the second chapter including the warning sign for yaoi at the top. *sigh* I really like how you've worded the story and everything, but if Stone was a girl, then I think I would like the story a bit more. *no offense* Ah well.. Nice story anyway. *grins* Please write more, I totally hate cliffhangers.

Not bad. I look forward to the next part.

Continue it! Continue it! *jumps up and down* Do more or I will threaten you with...er...oh hell, I'll think of something! I love assassin stories! And I have a thing for yaoi fics. Of course, most of those are anime, but hey!