|Reviews for Just a Little Bit|
| havefunyolo chapter 10 . 1/11/2013
i love this story...i had the feeling alan liked my but im really confused about jet one minute hes all right the next hes a total jerk hes so complicated...i really love walker and his sense of humour but i dont like patrick,brody seemed nice at first but now hes so...and jordyn is totally unfair she acts like amys the bad guy when she has herself to blame...i really love your story,update soon...
| Carzilla888 chapter 10 . 12/15/2012
I like this but dang Amy got it going on she got dudes on deck yo all hot might I add
| CrimsonSilence chapter 10 . 2/22/2011
Hot damn you're good. It all comes back to Jet it seems and I really want to know why. I love Walker he's pretty great not gonna lie. I can't wait until you update next!
| simranm chapter 9 . 10/20/2010
omg live this
| annne chapter 10 . 6/8/2010
I really like this story a lot. Please update soon. BTW I love Jet!
| Dwindling Fire chapter 10 . 3/30/2010
woot! i love it. I reckon Jet can be a nice guy, but what the hell does he have against her in the first place? and naww Alan is so sweet xD even though he was an ass in the beginning. meh. i know its been a year? two years? but please update!
| Dwindling Fire chapter 5 . 3/29/2010
i like it, but its confuzzling. where does Jet come into all of this? Whats with Alan being all mysterious. and Jet too. Whats with Brody and his suss-ness? but i like!
| GeeKunMow chapter 10 . 3/3/2010
Nice story but the wording gets a bit confusing sometimes. Things like saying "might of" instead of "might have" are slightly distracting from the story. I think a couple chapters back, Jordyn was complaining about Amy's father's promotion and she said something like "it minus well be a year!" It took me a second there to pause and think "it might as well..."? Maybe you should look for a beta so your good story is complete with good grammar/whatever as well.
Oh, and I noticed you were kind of laying it on the heavy side with Amy's disgust with Lauren. Are you trying to make a point that she (Amy) is homophobic or something? Or do you have an aversion to lesbians yourself?
Anyway, good job with the story so far. I hope your life isn't too busy, since I'm pretty eager for the next chapter.
| Kiss of the Oblivious chapter 10 . 2/27/2010
I love your characters. They are all different and unique in their own way. Walker is one of my favorites. You really portrayed him as a nice fun loving guy who I wish I knew in real life. Jet is definitely interesting though I can't think of much to say about him. He is a mystery...I suppose. Like why did he even suggest the whole prom idea? What was in it for him...I wonder. It's been a while since you've updated this story and I hope that you haven't completely forgotten in because that would really be a shame. I could see this story going in so many directions and the fact that I have no idea as to where this story in going get's my excited and just waiting to read more.
| Pseudonym59 chapter 10 . 2/10/2010
Ok, I get it now. NO more explaination needed. ALan and Amy are good together.
| Pseudonym59 chapter 7 . 2/10/2010
I'm seriously confused now. So let me get this straight:
1) Patrick broke up with Jordyn.
2) Brody likes Jordyn.
3) Walker's JUST a friend.
4) Amy MIGHT like Alan but he's dating Dina.
5) Jordyn and Amy aren't friends anymore.
6) Jordyn still likes Patrick.
That's basically it but I still don't understand the ultimatum. And also, where's Jordyn? Explain please!
Other than my confusion, this story is amazing.
| Pseudonym59 chapter 5 . 2/10/2010
Well, I'm not really sure who's the romance is going to be between. It's probably better that way though, more surprise. As usual, the chapter was great. So much drama.
| Pseudonym59 chapter 3 . 2/10/2010
WOW. WOW. WOW. Intense. I am officially addicted now.
| Pseudonym59 chapter 2 . 2/10/2010
Wow, this story sounds really good!
| funnechick chapter 10 . 12/5/2009
Seriously...what is Jett's deal? And I can't say things are going to work out with Amy and Alan if she can't stop herself from even looking at Jett whenever he's in the vicinity (especially if he's with another girl).
Please update as soon as you can!