|Reviews for Burning Cigarettes On Raw Lips|
| From The Stone Bridge chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
What book were you reading? Will you continue on with these? ilike it. I hope so.
| McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
You expanded with this one, and it's stunning-bravely tearing into the insanity that we all know lives in us somewhere...
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Interesting piece (in a good way). Great job at description. Nice work. Keep writing!
Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.
| Dot Cubed chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
I love this, and I'm not sure why. The imagery is just amazing, and it's so raw and beautiful and awesome.
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
I liked it. I thought it was good. And if you ever need any help, just let me know. I beta as well as write, and would be glad to help you :)
Anyways, as I said, I like this piece. It's very...interesting. Keep it up :)
| monster dia chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
I like this. I enjoy the metaphors and the way you describe the fire, pretty-ugly-pretty, and I like Angel overall. She's a paradoxical pretty-ugly-pretty monster.
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
I liked the other version better. no offense.