Reviews for Elysium
Singing After Dark chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
by far my new favorite of your poems. it's decisive, but leaves the readers wanting more. "The world will turn, just sing" is so easily beautiful; I want to make that line tangible somehow. beautiful imagery involving skin and a map. simply lovely.
Solstice Of Light chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Not your best, but you have some good bits. The weaker parts for me are where it seems you've found a word that you just REALLY REALLY want to use :p

Lady Fingers chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
this is very very wonderful and fantastical

i am a fan

-lady fingers

we are fiction press sisters then?
lymli chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
wow, the imagery is full of passion.