Reviews for snapshots of life and everything in between |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A beautiful addition. Simple yet beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() "A battered sun rises. The pink coat of breaking dawn palms the sky and climbs." Those lines were pure BRILLIANCE! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This last one - wow. I've said this far too often about your work already, but I can really feel this one; it just really... hits home, I guess. But I've said that before. Anyway, beautifully written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "A melody of aches sewing it shut." An incredible line! Very profound and deeply emotional. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this. i haven't read the other piece it's in, but i feel it does work very well on its own. the ending is beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Scared of dreaming too much." Great line! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this. The imagery was intense, vivid and original... and the format was really good. I loved the phrase 'handful of stars' it was such a unique way of kind of depriving these amazing things of their clestial mystique... if that makes ANY sense. Anyways, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah, fantastic! I always thought i was a failure, turns out i'm just a wrongly juggled masterpiece. Thanks for the reassurance. Thank you also for the review, yours was probably the most in-depth/detailed one i got. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing! Great way to describe how one feels. I can relate. Keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() konnichi wa Stunning. May I please use this quote in my quote book? It is absolutely... STUNNING. I am in absolute awe. Ha det -Shan- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simple, but Beautiful! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those were really excellent. I know it can be challenging to finish some writings, but things like this are a great way of seeing what people think of them. Hopefully you'll be able to write an entire piece to them. Keep it Up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() konnichi wa "i've found a handful of stars / dying away / slowly like her spirit" I love the phrase "handful of stars." For some odd reason, it seems more poetic to me than just "stars." *shrug* Also, that piece of the poem - that I loved. :) Ha det -Shan- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful imagery! Our hearts really do die away like stars. I love your idea of posting lines or a few lines that have meaning enough on their own. That happens to me all of the time. Sometimes, one line is better than twenty :P. Update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful. I think it might read better if slowly was on the fourth line instead of the last. I believe there sould also be a comma between slowly and like. Cheers, r. |