Reviews for Let Me Question You
xGekkeiju chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Ooh, this one is fun! I like the structured first line of each stanza and the free-flowing lines that follow. I like free-verse poems that aren't completely random and all over the map; this is really nice. And you've got some great lines in here! Some of my favourites are "Not in this lifetime / Not on this plane" and "It's like you don't exist anymore / Somewhere between counterfeit and certainty". I ate those lines right up. Delicious. Jeez.

Great work on this one! One or two awkward lines, but nothing substantial enough to put here, so no worries. Keep it up!

Wren
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Great job on this, sometimes when we let things take over and that causes problems like not being ourself anymore. Keep it Up!