Reviews for Let Me Question You
xGekkeiju chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Ooh, this one is fun! I like the structured first line of each stanza and the free-flowing lines that follow. I like free-verse poems that aren't completely random and all over the map; this is really nice. And you've got some great lines in here! Some of my favourites are "Not in this lifetime / Not on this plane" and "It's like you don't exist anymore / Somewhere between counterfeit and certainty". I ate those lines right up. Delicious. Jeez.

Great work on this one! One or two awkward lines, but nothing substantial enough to put here, so no worries. Keep it up!

~Wren
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Great job on this, sometimes when we let things take over and that causes problems like not being ourself anymore. Keep it Up!