Reviews for Holding Back
AleynaP chapter 3 . 8/4/2013
Really have been enjoying reading your work, I'm not particularly good at editing, but I have to point out towards the beginning of your chapter Allyia says,

"..There's just too much going threw my head."

Threw should be changed to through

hate to be amongst the grammar nazis, but it's something I would want to know about my own work (if I had any)

Looking forward to reading more of your other stories!
Shadow Kissed Twilight chapter 4 . 3/31/2013
Ugh, this one is good too! Please update it when you can.

Shadow Kissed
Greecian chapter 4 . 7/20/2011
yayy! I want to read more, now! please update soon, i love when my favorite stories are updated frequently, and this is my new favorite! love the story line please please please put up the next chapter soon!

OneChance chapter 4 . 7/5/2011
This is an interesting story, and I am very disappointed that it appears you will not continue it, based on the time since your last update. If you do decide to continue, I will gladly read more.
pille-ip chapter 4 . 6/17/2011
Interesting. Update soon!
Charlee Rayne chapter 4 . 12/10/2010
and. you. stop. THERE?
Crankygal chapter 4 . 7/14/2010
This story is simply refreshing and interesting, it sparks my interest n you should most definitely continue it. Update more often please, for the sake of my sanity. Gosh i'm wondering where e kiss will lead to.
Im Just Mlssundaztood chapter 4 . 3/28/2010
Love the story. So escorts are for sex? Ha, that's cool. I would assume it's for a girl to stay pure til marriage but I like this idea better. Why is is okay for the guy to have as much sex as he wants but it's a scandal for a women to do so...

Love the story. Please update soon.

Im Just Mlssundaztood
MuseofMagic chapter 4 . 1/24/2010
I feel like the story is a little rushed and jumps around rather rapidly. It can get a bit confusing, but the overall plot seems interesting enough and I look forward to reading more and seeing where you take it. I do suggest though maybe trying to describe events and especially Allyia's feelings and thoughts in a bit more detail, but even if you choose not to, I think it'll still be a fairly interesting read, so please, continue soon!
Topez chapter 4 . 7/17/2009
Pls continue writing. I love the story. n the last chp was interesting. :) haha...
MarloCarlo10 chapter 4 . 7/9/2009
Good chapter!

I would've never guessed that was what escorts were for XDD
MarloCarlo10 chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Hm something's off with the prince! I wouldn't have guessed!

That's awesome that she sneaks off on her adventures!
aflores90 chapter 4 . 7/8/2009
This is a pretty good story. I'd like to see where it goes :).
MarloCarlo10 chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Aww poor Hayden...
Topez chapter 3 . 7/3/2009
Hi. Love your story. Pls continue writing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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