Reviews for Breathe For Me, Into Me, Around Me
TheBeautyOfTheGrave chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I love this. The feelings in it are so vivid and poignant and I like the style too, with all the haikus together, makes it easy to read yet there is no abrupt ending. Good job, continue writing xx
lymli chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
perfect reflection of a wild love, the first stanzas are filled with passion.

great writing.
CandleQueen chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
I usually don't enjoy haikus too much, but I'll make an exception for this. I especially liked the parallelism in these two lines:

In my ear. "Fuck me. Kiss me."

Too much. Not enough.

-Ramen
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
hmm interesting I didn't see the "T" so I was scared for a moment then looked back up and saw it and thought all well. Anywhoo I think it was very well written. I cant do haikus to save my life. I enjoyed reading it even though it scared me for a moment lol. Well done. Keep writting