Reviews for fading stars & angel wings
gg. lass chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
this is beautiful but unbelievably sad.

i really liked the descriptions...we got to know both people in such a short span of time but almost fully.

nice job.

yours until the wind changes,

gg
x account closed x chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
and melancholy smilies will play across the lips of the masses.

parts of this were too beautiful for the end ("that would be an awful waste of space"). it reminds me of dying armageddon children, or convicts, or something. i do not know.

it was bittersweet and beautiful and the only thing i can think to suggest is quotation marks.