|Reviews for a deep connection|
| JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
that is what a call a poem of deep intercession!
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I like this but how you end it in daddy I think for the tone of this piece father would be better suited but aside from that it is amazing my dear )
| helixdown chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Wow, i love the acrostic thing you did there!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
"our connection is a/d-e-e-p-e-r/ than".. either a deeper one or just is deeper than
"e very piece and"... I don't think you need the and and you just had the and in the line before, so I might get rid of it.
I like the piece, the formatting is interesting and I like how you go through different pieces. I also like the ending it was unexpected. Nicely done.
| Iccle Fairy chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
very well written!
| Dreaming Chica chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
A poem filled with powerful emotions, well done! I like how you made this poem very discriptive, I think it added alot to it!
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
An absolutely beautiful piece, I thought you did a great job with the ending. Keep it Up!