Reviews for you keep following me
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I think this feeling of being followed by a person you know and love (or rather did and or should) can be shared among many, although your wording tells your story and your experiances. It's really nice becuase you make the reader reflect on their life by telling of your own.
Cinderella Is Dead chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Well done. It's so sad and although you use the word 'angry,' it seems more longing and sad.
helixdown chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Woah, i thought this was going to be about a relationship, and now it's about, well let's see, from what i see a dead grandparent. Anyways, good, lol, i'm not too good at reviewing poetry, sorry.