Reviews for Alternate Realities
queenhalloween chapter 3 . 7/27/2008
Hahaha. Made me laugh at the randomness. :] So they're running from that awful Jay and then they're suddenly wearing 1800's clothing. I still loved it. You know, I'm really liking Alternate Realities (Chris sounds really cool) because teens can actually relate to it if even a bit. And I did notice the difference in writing style. I personally liked this one better but I think you should stick with whatever you're comfortable with. :]
queenhalloween chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Lovely! I enjoy your new ideas for stories. I'm already loving your character Lucy. She's got hilarity-issues. I noticed that you put Rae instead of Lucy when they part ways. Or is that just me? :]