Reviews for Lets Play 10 Questions
j0rja chapter 1 . 9/25/2019
Awwwwww this is so adorable I'd love to see more of them!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
awwwww 3
DragonOwl chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
Nice! Is he the owner of the blue car?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Those questions were seriously like the ones in the story, Making him Notice, Chapter 8.

? Coincidence, i hope.
skylaire chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
cuute :3 creepy...but cute
SwimmingThroughExistance chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
.GOD! this was well-written, the plot was interesting, i loved the subtle humor, i loved the end, i loved the guy and i thought this was brilliant:)

write more, soon:)
natmarie chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Super cute idea. Read through, some typos sneak in and there are a few places that you might be able to use different words to help with flow and description. But lovely, played in my head like a movie.
Kalilah chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
My favourite line: "Cool, I thought that only happened in books." xD I don't really know why, but I just love that reaction to the electric shocks/tingle ; "Cool". xD Love your oneshots.
Ngoc1231 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Because this is a romance story and suppose to be obvious, so I'm guessing Jake is the crushee that owns the car she likes right? And he is the crushee right?

The line 'you're kidding me, right' is a hard line to understand. I was going to say that I would have thought most guys thought it would be an okay thing to say, but then I realized that I would use it on guys who are jerks too haha.

Love the story!

~*~Ngoc1231~*~
lilaclia chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
Aw , that was so sweet. if only guys in real life would do that. They should learn. anyways, I like you wrote everything out and arranged it. The idea was great too. The ending was incredibly sweet and cute, but I just find it sad that he didn't get to find out she ad a crush on him. Great Job with this ! :)
Has A WaywithWords chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
I gotta to say, you write the best oneshots. I read your other one about the waterslide and I really liked it. This is a really great story.
her-thoughts chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Aww so cute, it sounds like the plot of a movie. I wish this would happen in real life, keep up the good work!
glamoureste chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
i LOVE this one-shot!

it's so original and incredibly cute!
DragonMistressandTamer chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Even though the idea of this happening in real life would be kind of creepy, it is really cute in this story. I wish it would happen to me. That would have been a really cute way to ask a girl to prom. Anyway, very good story. Keep writing.
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
that was nice. except you spelled "course" in "of course" wrong. it's a U, not an A. nice job nonetheless!
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