Reviews for Lets Play 10 Questions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwww this is so adorable I'd love to see more of them! |
![]() ![]() awwwww 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! Is he the owner of the blue car? |
![]() ![]() Those questions were seriously like the ones in the story, Making him Notice, Chapter 8. ? Coincidence, i hope. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cuute :3 creepy...but cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() .GOD! this was well-written, the plot was interesting, i loved the subtle humor, i loved the end, i loved the guy and i thought this was brilliant:) write more, soon:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super cute idea. Read through, some typos sneak in and there are a few places that you might be able to use different words to help with flow and description. But lovely, played in my head like a movie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My favourite line: "Cool, I thought that only happened in books." xD I don't really know why, but I just love that reaction to the electric shocks/tingle ; "Cool". xD Love your oneshots. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Because this is a romance story and suppose to be obvious, so I'm guessing Jake is the crushee that owns the car she likes right? And he is the crushee right? The line 'you're kidding me, right' is a hard line to understand. I was going to say that I would have thought most guys thought it would be an okay thing to say, but then I realized that I would use it on guys who are jerks too haha. Love the story! ~*~Ngoc1231~*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw , that was so sweet. if only guys in real life would do that. They should learn. anyways, I like you wrote everything out and arranged it. The idea was great too. The ending was incredibly sweet and cute, but I just find it sad that he didn't get to find out she ad a crush on him. Great Job with this ! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gotta to say, you write the best oneshots. I read your other one about the waterslide and I really liked it. This is a really great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww so cute, it sounds like the plot of a movie. I wish this would happen in real life, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVE this one-shot! it's so original and incredibly cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though the idea of this happening in real life would be kind of creepy, it is really cute in this story. I wish it would happen to me. That would have been a really cute way to ask a girl to prom. Anyway, very good story. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was nice. except you spelled "course" in "of course" wrong. it's a U, not an A. nice job nonetheless! |