Reviews for When in Ogunquit
Regin chapter 6 . 2/25/2009
I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!
Counting Petals chapter 6 . 12/18/2008
I'm going to plead college as my excuse for not reviewing sooner. Just thought I'd let you know how much I loved the interaction between Avery and Ryan )
katelynn63 chapter 6 . 9/30/2008
omfg! i love this story! you have GOT to post more soon! i wish you had more stories; you're an amazing writer!
Courters chapter 6 . 9/18/2008
wee! I'm glad you guys posted. It was a great chapter by the way! I look forward to reading more. I've read a lot of "bet" stories, but none quite like this. Keep up the outstanding work! :)
S.West-Heuler chapter 6 . 9/16/2008
Ah hahahahahaha. I love Ryan. Like so much. And I really like Ave's and Janna's scene - always fun. I really like this a lot. I know you had a lot of fun with Janna and Ryan, but in the end I think it's paid off! WOO JILL!

Counting Petals chapter 5 . 9/14/2008
Review Marathon! (-points to link on profile-)

I like Ryan's protectiveness of Adele, because it makes him seem like a little less of a conceited, womanizing asshole...but only a little.

I also like Grant's choice of girl - he knows and we all know that things are going to get interesting. ;) chapter 5 . 9/1/2008
Please update! I really, really like this and hopefully now that the bet is on and the girl is picked, we'll get to see more Ryan and Avery. I need to see their chemistry...I'm sure you'll write it fabulously. (;

And the way you write all those cocky comments is priceless. Keep up the great work and please update soon! Finally I have found another author in the likeness of Myrika.
Courters chapter 5 . 8/23/2008
I really liked this chapter! My favorite part is in th end when Ryan opens his eyes expecting Emily and the interaction that follows. It was funny. :)
dreamgazer220 chapter 4 . 8/18/2008
My finished review for chapter 5:

FINALLY, they meet and now the story can really begin! WOOT! So I loved this chapter. The pool scene was as fantastical as I imagined it to be GOOD JOB! Now I'm tired. So I'm going to bed. NIGHT!
dreamgazer220 chapter 5 . 8/18/2008
menace in training chapter 4 . 8/18/2008
Nice story, nice plot - a little cliche, but that's why they're cliche's. Because everybody likes them. There's a reason they're so popular. Only qualm is that it sounds quite a bit like the movie Cruel Intentions - have you ever seen it? If not, you should cause it's brilliant!
S.West-Heuler chapter 4 . 8/9/2008
ZOMGOSH HOORAY FOR NEW CHAPTERS! And good job with all the fixin's and what not. (Yeah, I spent a week in the south, I picked up their language! Watch out, I'ma start saying ya'll soon. *gasp*) So anyway, I liked it! (Of course.) GOOD JOB JILL! *cough* I mean, L. Shaye.
ileum chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
Pretty good.

It was okay.
Counting Petals chapter 2 . 7/21/2008
I liked this chapter. I could relate to the whole being home from your first year of college and the weirdness of it because I'm in that position right now.
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
Review Marathon! (-points to link on profile-)

I liked Ryan. He was funny, and some of his comments kept me laughing the whole time...and I usually don't laugh out loud when I'm reading.

The comment about his father's client's beard also made me laugh. It seemed important to me, too. ;)
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