Reviews for All About Us |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't mind the story so far, but the inaccuracies are killing me. Coconuts have very little milk in them, maybe a sip. Strawberries do not grow in the same climate as coconuts. Boars are pack animals and if you kill one the whole pack is coming after you. There is no way that this puny little boy could kill a full grown boar, those things ar s. Among others... I just have such a hard time ignoring those parts but the plot is pretty good! Also you can eat food after the exp date. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been reading this since you first posted this story years ago. I just got back into my account and saw 3 new chapters since I last read it. Seriously I love it so much and can't wait for you to add more chapters whenever that may be. I also need to know where I can read Now and forever yours. I hope you see this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh ending the chapter with foreshadowing, how devious. I love their dynamic and my gosh Angel is so cute and protective. I wonder about the Martin thing, is it true? That would definitely text their relationship if Martin started to be a problem! Thanks so much for sharing this lovely story with us, you're very talented. I don't know if it was abandoned or not, but I do hope you update. Either way, thanks so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an awesome story, I do hope that you continue. Great work I must say. |
![]() ![]() Yay! Love this story a whole lot ! Hope you won't abandon it :) |
![]() ![]() Yaaaas finally! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story! are you going to update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot Damn! that chapter was long and totally full or awesomeness. brotherly awesomeness. love how mom is like... boys your identical lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story. I was looking for something to read to go to sleep to a few nights ago, when I found All About Us. Not only was I up all night reading it, I've now officially re-read this story probably 10 times in the last 3 days. I can't wait for the next installment! I hope all is going well with you, and please, don't stop writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah not fair! Talk about a cliff hanger for the ages, thanks for the update. I reread everything and I'm all catched up now |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm screaming because it's been almost 6 years since the last update. It feels like I'm living the tale of the Prodigal Son |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a lot on my plate right now but don't think for one second I have given up on this story. I want to hopefully review this story so when I get back to writing I want be totally off. I hope to one day continue this even though I'm without my laptop ugh...I have to use my fiance's but if I have to steal his so I can write then so be it. Please please don't give up on me :( I will continue it. |
![]() ![]() Please give us any form of fxxxin closure pls. |
![]() ![]() It's such a shame. This story is so well written and dark and intense yet there isn't much reviews. This is my umpteenth time reading and it gets better each time. I sincerely hoped that you haven't abandoned this fic. I would really love to see how angel and Payton come together in the end. Pls pls update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update your stories! They are all really good! I feel bad for Angel but the rape was a little too far in my opinion. I'm assuming it will take a while to build a relationship with each other again, though it seems Payton has forgiven him mostly. Hope they can work things out :) |