Reviews for All About Us
Cacby chapter 19 . 7/3/2016
Yay! Love this story a whole lot ! Hope you won't abandon it :)
Guest chapter 18 . 4/15/2016
Yaaaas finally!
thejadem chapter 17 . 3/30/2016
love this story! are you going to update?
Cupcak3 chapter 17 . 3/15/2016
Hot Damn! that chapter was long and totally full or awesomeness. brotherly awesomeness. love how mom is like... boys your identical lol
KeresElric chapter 17 . 3/14/2016
I LOVE this story. I was looking for something to read to go to sleep to a few nights ago, when I found All About Us. Not only was I up all night reading it, I've now officially re-read this story probably 10 times in the last 3 days.
I can't wait for the next installment! I hope all is going well with you, and please, don't stop writing! :)
Site-3 chapter 17 . 3/11/2016
Woah not fair! Talk about a cliff hanger for the ages, thanks for the update. I reread everything and I'm all catched up now
Site-3 chapter 6 . 3/11/2016
I'm screaming because it's been almost 6 years since the last update. It feels like I'm living the tale of the Prodigal Son
enternally-dark90 chapter 17 . 8/10/2013
I have a lot on my plate right now but don't think for one second I have given up on this story. I want to hopefully review this story so when I get back to writing I want be totally off. I hope to one day continue this even though I'm without my laptop ugh...I have to use my fiance's but if I have to steal his so I can write then so be it. Please please don't give up on me :( I will continue it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Please give us any form of fxxxin closure pls.
Persimmon chapter 11 . 7/22/2013
It's such a shame. This story is so well written and dark and intense yet there isn't much reviews. This is my umpteenth time reading and it gets better each time. I sincerely hoped that you haven't abandoned this fic. I would really love to see how angel and Payton come together in the end. Pls pls update.
TheDarkPassenger chapter 17 . 6/22/2013
Please update your stories! They are all really good! I feel bad for Angel but the rape was a little too far in my opinion. I'm assuming it will take a while to build a relationship with each other again, though it seems Payton has forgiven him mostly. Hope they can work things out :)
Elsa Carbajal chapter 17 . 4/21/2013
This is a great story I love it. When are you going to update this & all your other stories?
Nora chapter 17 . 3/28/2013
You need to updateeeeee
JemCarstairs chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
I can't believe how good you are at pacing this story. Sure it's a bit slow but the pr
Rain4916 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I hope you update soon, it's almost been a year since you're last update *gasp* (shocking that time goes by so quickly).
Anyway, I really like how you're playing out the relationship. It's a simple story that's not simple - I like how you've created this self-contained world revolving around Angel and Payton and even though a lot of things happen around them that stretch credibility (being stranded on island, having a secret sister, Payton's friend actually liking him, etc), these situations aren't overbearing or annoying. Just like Angel and Payton, we learn to manage with them so that they don't become too important.
I wish you could move the development just a bit more not only for the sake of the readers but for your own. I know that life gets hectic and sometimes things that you once upon cared about become less important - it would be quiet sad if that happened to this story. I don't know how you could speed up development, but I think that at this point Payton is realizing his feelings for Angel - he's just suppressing them. Perhaps you could change that by making Angel ignore Payton - he could take up his old habits of ignoring Payton - I don't think that would be too unrealistic given that he doesn't want to hurt Payton so avoiding him would be best.
Hmm... I think that is all I wanted to say for now. I'm quite sleepy so forgive me if my review does not make sense.
I hope you update soon - I'll definitely be reviewing from now on.
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