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enternally-dark90 chapter 17 . 8/10/2013
I have a lot on my plate right now but don't think for one second I have given up on this story. I want to hopefully review this story so when I get back to writing I want be totally off. I hope to one day continue this even though I'm without my laptop ugh...I have to use my fiance's but if I have to steal his so I can write then so be it. Please please don't give up on me :( I will continue it.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Please give us any form of fxxxin closure pls.
Persimmon chapter 11 . 7/22/2013
It's such a shame. This story is so well written and dark and intense yet there isn't much reviews. This is my umpteenth time reading and it gets better each time. I sincerely hoped that you haven't abandoned this fic. I would really love to see how angel and Payton come together in the end. Pls pls update.
TheDarkPassenger chapter 17 . 6/22/2013
Please update your stories! They are all really good! I feel bad for Angel but the rape was a little too far in my opinion. I'm assuming it will take a while to build a relationship with each other again, though it seems Payton has forgiven him mostly. Hope they can work things out :)
Elsa Carbajal chapter 17 . 4/21/2013
This is a great story I love it. When are you going to update this & all your other stories?
Nora chapter 17 . 3/28/2013
You need to updateeeeee
JemCarstairs chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
I can't believe how good you are at pacing this story. Sure it's a bit slow but the pr
Rain4916 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I hope you update soon, it's almost been a year since you're last update *gasp* (shocking that time goes by so quickly).
Anyway, I really like how you're playing out the relationship. It's a simple story that's not simple - I like how you've created this self-contained world revolving around Angel and Payton and even though a lot of things happen around them that stretch credibility (being stranded on island, having a secret sister, Payton's friend actually liking him, etc), these situations aren't overbearing or annoying. Just like Angel and Payton, we learn to manage with them so that they don't become too important.
I wish you could move the development just a bit more not only for the sake of the readers but for your own. I know that life gets hectic and sometimes things that you once upon cared about become less important - it would be quiet sad if that happened to this story. I don't know how you could speed up development, but I think that at this point Payton is realizing his feelings for Angel - he's just suppressing them. Perhaps you could change that by making Angel ignore Payton - he could take up his old habits of ignoring Payton - I don't think that would be too unrealistic given that he doesn't want to hurt Payton so avoiding him would be best.
Hmm... I think that is all I wanted to say for now. I'm quite sleepy so forgive me if my review does not make sense.
I hope you update soon - I'll definitely be reviewing from now on.
lovpeanutchoc3 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I love the sibling rivalry :D
Alex Dark chapter 8 . 5/3/2012
This is where I thought things were going. Don't worry, I'm not gonna flame you for it. i actually find incest kind of hot, d3epending on how things go. I've never read female incest, but I like what you've done with this so far. i am just wondering where it's going to go from here.

Alex dark
Alex Dark chapter 7 . 5/3/2012
I kind of get the feeling there is more going on here than is shown at this moment. Great job once again.

Alex dark
Alex Dark chapter 5 . 5/3/2012
At least they're getting along somewhat. I can't say that I would want them to always fight. At some point, if you have siblings, you can at least get some understanding; once or maybe twice that is.
Alex Dark chapter 4 . 5/3/2012
Sorry I didn't review earlier. I got too caught up in the story that I forgot. Don't worry, this is a good thing coming from me. Can't wait to see where this going to go. Just wanted to say that you did a great job so far.

Alex dark
xoxlizzie again chapter 17 . 4/27/2012
When I said that I haven't been on since 2012, I meant 2011! Wow, I must have sounded so stupid. Yeah, I just had to clear that up.
xoxlizzie chapter 17 . 4/27/2012
Wow, I haven't been on this site since 2012. I didn't know if you were going to update again so I didn't bother checking, imagine my surprise when I found out that you upated! I was so happy!

This chapter was really fantastic! I'm glad things aren't extremely awkward between angle and payton, but I'm hoping to see the old angel again soon! He is such a great character, he has so much depth. That is one thing that is great about your stories, the characters always have so much depth (thats rare to find in a story), and Angel is definitly my favorite of all of the charcters in your fanfics.

Please update soon, I love this story so much and was so happy to find that you updated.
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