Were you ever successful in publishing this? I followed it a long time ago and really liked it.

Aw i rlly wanted to read your stories. You are a good author and one day i hope to see the stories again.

Seriously? Just take the whole friggin thing down and leave no trace of this story on the website. What's the point of having it here, taunting me with all of it's previous awesomeness, if I can't read a god damned thing? (no offense to you)

aw:[ this story sounded good. well guess ill just hope you publish so i can read lol.

i read the story before it was taken down and i really liked it! good luck with publishing it!

charlotte

wow. ive completely fallen in love with ur story. its a work of genius! i LUV ur writin! thnx for giving a great time readin this.

I have to say, I really enjoy your stories...and even though I'm not usually one for fantasy I think I really like this story too.

I hope that you continue updating your stories, and if you don't and move somewhere else or something that you'll leave info on where to find them.

I'm pretty sure I know what's going to happen in your unfinished stories, but I'm also pretty sure that I would love to read your version...

Just a quick note.

Ive just finished The Flower Girl, and i loved it. I can see by the notes you put at the end of each chapter that you put alot of work into this story.

And i just want you to know it has paid off, it is a quick pased, lovely book. And some parts had me laughing out loud.

Carry on with the great writing, and even if you only get a few comments on a chapter/story dont let that sop you from continueing, it may be that people dont want to read it until it is complete.

x

I just want to say that I'm loving this story! I'm supposed to be studying for finals but I keep telling myself "one more chapter, just one more chapter." I won't be able to concentrate until I finish the story :)

This is a really good story. at this point, the writing still feels youg, i'm guessing you weren't too old when you started this, but I can feel that there will be a lot of progress with the writing as well as the story. I will definitely follw this untill I'm done :)

Ok i put off all my coursework and revision just so that I could read this story and I loved it soo much! Its seriously creative and I was hooked. By far one of the best stories I have ever read. It was unpredictable and every time I thought that I was gonna stop at a chapter and go to sleep or do some work, I couldnt cause I wanted to read the rest of the story, anyway I cant wait to start reading the sequal :D

This was a really good story. I really, really, really liked it. I have to admit, I'm a little sad it ended. Nice job. :)

WOW... only read the first chapter and thats all I really have to say

i don't think i have ever read a story that has made me cry like this. i am amazed at how well this story played out and i will not lie there a few parts that you tell in this story that scared me as it is very similar to points in my own life. but all the same i had to know the ending to this story and with Brookston dying in the end broke my heart. for future stories i am going to sujest rereading them before you post there are missing words or miss used words at least from what i was reading if i am wrong so sorry it just seem that way to me. but i really really really loved the story thank you for allowing me into the amazing world. feel free to view some of my stories and let me know what you think i am updating most if not all of them hopefully i can finish some.(stuck in writters block)

First, a slight inconsistency problem in Chapter 10. You wrote that "It had been almost ten years since Lydia had been struck down, a stake stabbed through her heart and her body turning to nothing more than dust at the hand of none other than Turkish Forster." I'm assuming that you wrote this before you started to write out "Dark Side of the Moon", so I just wanted to let you know that you didn't edit this number to 20 years, since Lydia's death occurred before Molly's birth.

Second, I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading "The Flower Girl" very much. It's probably one of the better works that you've done, and I applaud the effort you put into this story. Keep up the good work.