|Reviews for Better Left Unsaid|
| loveistheshortestformofsuicide chapter 3 . 7/9/2009
Omg, he just left him in the Burger King? Wtf? I didn't know Jack was so like...insensitive. Although, he did make him walk home from school that one time. /:
It still sorta pissed me off. Lol.
But yay for Josh walking all that way on his own. Wow.
When I was in NY my dad had to lead us around everywhere. I know I would be lost. What with my sense of direction, or lack thereof. (x
Haha, Josh is gonna get his own place? (: Aw. Is that where Dan comes in? I hope so, I always liked him. xD
| diebyownhands chapter 5 . 3/21/2009
It's been so long since I logged in that I had forgotten my password!
Any way I had to log in a tell you this was wonderful and that I hope you will continue to write. I read this all in one go and not once did I feel it didn't sound/flow right. Gah! Now I feel like reading the whole series again!
| Self Inflicted chapter 5 . 11/15/2008
I finally get down to reading this and I totally love you for doing this! I read this first before rereading Like It Or Not and now I feel this burning need to reread the entire arc. I really liked Patrick and I'm a little disappointed that he turned out to be well rather unsavoury but I really loved this. It's true that he had a life in between which I admit I've never really thought about. This one really made me cry a little but I'm sure you've noticed I'm a little biased towards Josh (he's my baby!). Tara is also incredibly annoying but I can't really bring myself to hate her.
Might there be another piece from Kay's POV?
| James Hiwatari chapter 5 . 11/12/2008
So that is how Dan came into the picture. INteresting.
It was a good ending, but because I liked it I half-wanted it not to end.
Ah, but anyway, it is not like it was the last of them, so...
Ahaha, I'm not making sense. Better stop now.
I liked Dan there. More than I liked him before.
Ah, whatever. Pretend I made some sense...
| Amindaya chapter 5 . 11/11/2008
I'm so lad you wrote this. It's nice to see how he turned into the person he is when he meets Kay for the second time.
| red-headed psychopaths wanted chapter 4 . 7/15/2008
No wonder Josh was so angry when he met Kay again...he IGNORED him!
I love this add-on to the series...I can't wait for more!
| The Intelligent Designer chapter 4 . 7/7/2008
This is your best writing out of all the stories in this series. I love it!
| Jowaco chapter 4 . 7/6/2008
Interesting take on Josh's life in the middle if you will, I'm enjoying it and do hope you continue. Please...Pretty Pretty please...don't make me beg...you know I'll do it!
| James Hiwatari chapter 4 . 7/4/2008
Yo wow wow, more chapters! More chapters, please!
JOsh is getting a life. And a boyfriend, it seems. I liked the scene in his birthday. If I was in is place I would've freaked out. XDD
DId you have this story planned when you wrote the other ones or are you making it all up now in a way that it fits with the rest?
| James Hiwatari chapter 3 . 7/4/2008
Hahahaha... Loved that ending.
I liked how JOsh remember he was once "normal" and walked to the place. Oh, I'm so proud of him! XD
And let the kid grow up!
(And when I think I Am 18 and I'm nowhere near living on my own, I can't help but feel that JOsh is more mature than I am... Which is, of course, really weird)
| James Hiwatari chapter 2 . 7/4/2008
I've always wonder what JOsh about his brother and Tara's marriage. Of course he would freak out. But the whole written thing is better than what I could have imagined.
I hat psycanalists. They don't do it right. THey never do. I'm of the opinion that Josh should go to a PErson Centred Terapist. They know what to do. XDD
(Of course, my opinion is biased, but I don't care. Mom does a very good job with me.)
| James Hiwatari chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Yeah, more Kay/Josh. I've missed them.
The chapter was nice. JOsh is all fucked up, for a change. I almost feel sorry for him. But I don't. I don't feel sorry because it is his fucked life that makes the thing interesting.
I'm a little sadistic...
| Amindaya chapter 4 . 7/3/2008
Words cannot describe how great it is to see inside Josh's head during this time of his life, before he got into drugs and became an author. Thanks!