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vanransandwich chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
I remember this one. :-) Can't wait to read the rest of it. Really liked it. :-D
NotMyShoes chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
I like this so far, and I'm interested to see where you go with it. The last two lines, however, were pretty confusing.

“They are killing them, Dreme. Nothing that any of the others have done,” others meaning the other Gods and Goddesses who actually care about my well being, “has gotten those rotten creatures to stop killing my wolves.” I sighed,

There are some problems with the punctuation as well as the verb tense that make it hard to figure out things such who's talking.

Other than that, I look forward to reading more.

NotMyShoes