Reviews for Half Way
Adis Crow chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
Born to die... but that's so sad. This is one of those poems that feels like the words are falling into a calm lake somewhere inside me and making ripples...

Sorry for the obscure review (I really like your poetry), but that "born to die" part got me wondering: do you believe that death is a part of life, or that life is a part of death?

Osprey
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
"sound good" sounds

"you don't help to get up" don't help me get up

I like the part you repeat, it's very relateable and very true. The rest of the piece is good too, but that was my favorite part
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Hmm interesting, well thought out and worded. I really liked the lines "There's people who are born to do something great/and there's people like us who are born to die" wow makes life seem worthless in a way... anywho great job! I enjoyed reading it
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
I like the ease with which it reads. However, I think the rating should be higher since it has swears in it.