|Reviews for relearning disaster in slow motion|
| english summer rain chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
last stanza is utter brilliance. your style is wonderful. lack of punctuation normally bugs (and confuses) me, but not so much here. you paint your picture well. great work :)
| Isca chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
"I thought things would get better." I can FEEL in pain in this piece. Keep up the good work!
| Baticul chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
The flow of this poem is incomparable. I love it. You are an amazing author.