| Reviews for Fake Engagement |
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  sara chapter 3 . 1/8/2011 Damn, I can't help it, I hate Micheal, too! lol |
 BlueAki chapter 4 . 1/8/2011 Well, I'm glad you didn't forget about this story. I can't wait to see the new updates and changes you make. :) |
| Jujubee58 chapter 3 . 12/18/2009 Oh don't stop now! I can't wait for them to get together so she can stop fighting her attraction. |
| destinys20 chapter 2 . 10/18/2009 This is good. I think Michael likes Desiree and she likes him too. Update please ! I want to know what happenend next . |
| Uranie chapter 3 . 10/18/2009 I'm curious about what goig to happen between this two. Update please |
| BlueAki chapter 3 . 10/14/2009 I'm waiting for her to really stand up and for Michael to get in trouble and for Jessica to get her head out of the clouds. Can't wait for the next update! |
| fanaserie chapter 3 . 7/19/2009 i do also think that desiree is in denial |
| Tracy chapter 3 . 7/14/2009 This story is great. I hope that you can finish it soon. |
| Tracy chapter 2 . 7/14/2009 When I read this, it doesn't read like a story it reads like an actual event. This is great and getting better as I read on. |
| Tracy chapter 1 . 7/14/2009 I love this chapter. I can relate to your character's feeling as a angry misfit who wants to be a part of something but not sure as to what. Its crazy how similar my life is to this character. I can't wait to read more. |
| karen timothy chapter 3 . 7/13/2009 Koving this story. I'd really like to see how these to end up together. Can't wait. |
| readergirl1 chapter 3 . 7/12/2009 Why is Des always getting caught by someone and in trouble? I really just wanted her to tell Michael what she thought of him. If for no other reason, than to finally get it off her chest. And why does Micheal find her so amusing all of the time? It's annoying. As far as Jessica, Des should just cut her loses now. Jessica has proven that she's loyal to nothing but her feelings for Michael and that she'll do whatever it takes to get him to notice her and be with him, including hurting Desiree. She said much after getting out of the car, that it might happen again so... Good update and I hope you update more often because its a good story. |
| namethegame chapter 3 . 7/11/2009 Okay, its either obsession or denial. Jessica needs to learn how to let go. Let go. I feel for Desiree, Evans is a complete **. I'm still wondering how those two are supposed to or going to hook up. Oh well, thanks for the nice update! |
| Helper bunnisocksgmail.com chapter 1 . 7/10/2009 You have a lot of run-ons and some sentences you could cut out to make your story flow better. Like:I only half listened as I played around with my French fries dipping them in the ketchup before taking a bite, what can I say, I was bored and if I had to resort to playing around with my French fries to release that boredom, then so be it. Could be:I only half listened as I played around with my French fries, I was bored. Just something to think about. |
| DiamondPrincess25 chapter 3 . 7/10/2009 I can seriously relate to your story and its freaking me out...but Im going to continue reading to see if what happens later on still relates. |