okay, the story sounds interesting so far, but your writing needs a bit more editing. just some grammer, and maybe fixing up a couple of awkward sentances. actually, i'd really like to beta your story. im alot better at grammer than my reveiw suggests. i want to work as an editor in a publishing company, so this would be good practise. PM me if you want me to!

update soon!

I'm really liking this story. I'm glad Desiree didn't just forgive Jessica; she was right in her assessment of her anyway. As for her punching Michael: amazing! I can't wait for more.

I really love the story so far. Yet, you haven't even updated in awhile.

Any possible way you can update this story.

Please.

update soon!

and what does TBC mean?

i really hope you haven't abandoed this story(: lol.

i really like this story

and that it's interracial is a plus!

I hate Evans right now. I do. I'm happy she socked him, he deserved it. The same goes for Jessica; I do think she should have forgiven her, but words like that take time. Low blow. That Georgina...pull her fake hair out.

Anyways this was a great read, and I would love to read more whenever you have the time.

My mouth dropped when I read what Jessica said. Like Oh No She Didn't! Seriously, this is a great-freaking awesome beginning in my opinion. I love your character, Desiree has many reasons to be the way she is. The writing is well written, and I just love it.

Hope to see more from you!

realy good im curious to see what will happen next.

love it

update soon

good start:)

can't wait to read more!

This story has amazing potential for angst and amusement, please update soon.

wow this story is so interesting. update again soon?

This story is off to an awesome start, I like it! I hope you know where you are going with this because I'm dying to know what happens next! After all that how could they possibly agree to a fake engagement. Will we see it from Michael's pov?

Please update soon! Thanks!

Brandy

wow this chick has anger issues and trust issues and needs to just let ppl into her life. she needs to let go. neway nice start. can't wait to read more.

Officially one of my favs! I love it.

But I thought the characters might be older somehow. This is starting out to be a good story.

Why does Des not stick up for herself? And I would drop Jessica too. What she said was uncalled for. She sounded like a jealous girlfriend. She's not acting like a friend to me.

Why did Michael do that anyway? He deserved that punch.