I do believe that this chapter was well worth the wait. :D I think that it was a very interesting way to build up the plot. :D I wondder what will happen next?

~nicola~

Damn..is everyone against her?

I love what you have so far... update as soon as possible

Welcome back and great update. My goodness I had to reread chapter one again before I went on to chapter two so I could recall what was happening anyway still enjoying this story poor girl can things get any worse. I think I still would have tried to make a run for it if I was her instead of getting dragged to the office and without a shirt at that how awful. Hope things get better for her so please update again real soon ok?

Thanks,

IP

ROFLMBO...she socked him in the jaw. Oh my goodness. Ok I agree with the Principal that she could have gone to the nurse or to the office to ask for a pass to leave school or to get another shirt from them or something or taken the sweat shirt from her friend..to walk around the scholl with only her bra on...oh man was she asking for trouble. Thanks for a great read and I am so glad that you updated before Janaury.

The same problems are there in this chapter it did mildly improve though and still has lots of potential please try and add more of her thoughts it was really good I don't really get Evean but wahtever anyway some great parts and I can't wait to hear more

I liked it the whole this is my life crap gets on my nerves knowing her history ruins a lot of parts of the story you know surspence or anything so you um killed that. The first chapter was pretty good besides that her friend wasn't well she wasn't written well and at some points the main lead was like a little unrelatable she didn't react right to certain things like her friend says that and then she smiles and drives off not normal or well it made her sound cold you also need a tad more detail at the same time as holding back information do you see what I'm saying look I'm just trying to be honest not cruel or mean or anything like that this story has heaps of potential and I can't wait to hear more

i like this story, but i have one problem. well, not really a problem, but something that seemed out of character, at least to me. seeing as desiree is black, i think she would reacted differently to georgia spilling food on her. i am a black person myself, and while usually being well-mannered and quiet, i would go crazy right there and then in the cafeteria. maybe desiree's personality is different, and i did notice that she punched michael, but to me at least, i would like to think that she would have kicked georgia's ass.

Hoorah for D! She should have kicked him in the nuts!

Hey! I was looking for your other story but couldnt access it but doesnt matter because instead I read Fake Engagment and you got me hooked. I hope you decided to continue this because I'm really curious to see how things play out between D and Michael

Interesting

Well I like the story and the fact that it is based in MA. as for the main character she is something else and I think that her friend is right that she does like him and he probably likes her too. I am looking forward to reading more of this fantastic story. Thanks

Wow.

Such a strong beginning.

I'm already hooked. [:

Ouch. lol

Hurry and update PLEASE!

wow, she told her, lol.

But if she's her friend, I can't believe she'd say something so rude. I don't blame Desiree(sp?) for leaving like that. you should continue with this, it seems like it might be interesting.