Reviews for Stolen
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
This is good. Peace.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
"you stole my innocence and dreams too"

I loved this line, it's so honest and somewhat desperate..

Great feelings conveyed.

fleur
Bazooka Joy chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
A special someone comes to mind when I think of this. Lovely poem, it is; something everyone should and may experience sometime in their lives.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
This is so incrdibly cute! I love it! Adding to C2!

XKristie MarieX
LadyRini478 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
This was so sweet and sad all at once. I love the message of this poem, a woman giving her heart to the man who broke it, yet allowing him to keep it happilym for she could nevr be happy having it back, broken and lonely. Great poem!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
The last line is phrased awkwardly. You don't think to live without someone. Maybe "'Cause I can't think about living without you"

I like this, it's very relateable and well expressed.
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I like the casual flow of this. especially in the line, "good for you, baby" :)
Isca chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
"Good for you, baby." I liked the honesty in that line.

"Just take care of my heart." That line is so innocent; so pure. Keep up the good work! :)
totallyinspired chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Aww so sweet