Reviews for The Death of the Dark Lord Thirilight
From0The0Ashes chapter 2 . 7/16/2013
This story is AWESOME! I've never read a story from the so called villain's POV, though I've considered doing it myself. And I love, in the least morbid way possible, how the heroine dies in the beginning. I'm all for switching stuff around. Keep going! You have a really engaging writing style, lighthearted but not idiotic. Thank you for being original!
TymCon chapter 16 . 3/10/2010
Nice new chapter. As per usual Thirrlight is funny. It's an enjoyable read, although if you want me to be honest im hoping for a big twist in the storyXD
sugaplumprincess chapter 15 . 1/16/2010
yay I was super excited to see an update! this was entertaining as always, and happily explained the slightly bizarre 'socks or war' letter from the last chapter, though I was hoping that Thirry was just being all crazy. I think he and the princess will do well together :)

this was rather short but i'm looking forward to more frequent updates since you said you'd be posting scene by scene?

one point, I thought Caurien was half-dragon and half-vampire, not half-incubus?
TymCon chapter 15 . 1/15/2010
NEW CHapter! I almost gave up hope. Good and i loved thje carrot mention:P
Gracefulfire chapter 15 . 1/14/2010
NEW CHAPTER! OM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM!

Hmm, so it wasn't Thirry who sent the socks or war message. hm...
TymCon chapter 14 . 9/25/2009
Was it the fact that the socks were given to the army and not exploded. Im probably wrong. Well good chapter and two new characters are introduced:P
Gracefulfire chapter 14 . 9/25/2009
Very, very good chapter. I really felt the connection between the father and daughter being balanced with the relation of king and princess. It's rare that I come across a work that portrays royalty as both a political class and as real people at the same time. Seriously, amazing work here.

So... I guessing the plot hole is that Thirry doesn't call out the king for knowing that the 'exploded' cargo was footwear. Why would he know that, unless his examiners reported the incident with the phrase 'rain of flaming socks', hmm? Are the socks already distributed or something so they can't be given back? Or were they really made of explodium?

I feel better about the whole kidnapping thing now that we know she's not in love, but the political implications are a little more serious now.

Melmo? What? I smell back-plot! Huzzah!

The set-up for the letter part was a bit confusing in places to see who was talking, but then I'm kinda hungry so it's probably my fault there. Although, I do wonder about how long Thirry has been in power and how long it would take a letter to travel between the two. Wait, how does the mail system work? Did Thirry like send a carrier vulture or something?

six classes AND work AND you still find time to write? Man, you make me feel lazy. Stupid 19th century British literature stealing all my time... again, try not to burn out. It would be kind of jarring if you start killing off characters for stress relief. You're a wonderful writer and I always look forward to the times when I can read this.
TymCon chapter 13 . 9/15/2009
Hahahah best part of this chapter was where the head of the household was talking to tieriel(I think im spelling his name wrong every time) and luiriene was crying out:P Wonder wat ardeem did to drought the place and cow the servents:P Defenitly a gem of a story:)
TymCon chapter 12 . 9/15/2009
Omg so shes meating thearyell:O Well this should be exciting, and kinda awkward:P
TymCon chapter 11 . 9/15/2009
Well we found out vyn killed thyleans faher, wordy plays pranks and a stuffed rabbit was involved in this chapter:D Cant have an evil overlord story without a stuffed rabbit:P:D
TymCon chapter 10 . 9/15/2009
I kinda expected Mortimer to kill them:P Salth is so pompous! Gr. Still like all youre caracters and salths father sounds cool.
TymCon chapter 9 . 9/15/2009
Thats a bad curse:O For a wound to reopen every month:O Hah that talk about the grandfather getting snagged on stuff:P Yeah it was a bit jaring, like the perspective, in the few chapters. As long as we can hear thyreals thoughts im happy:P
TymCon chapter 5 . 9/15/2009
three caravans of socks, thats bizare
TymCon chapter 4 . 9/15/2009
HAhaahha thirilights inermonouloges r so funny:P Especially the awkward silence part, and the grandfahers funny as well:P
Gracefulfire chapter 13 . 9/7/2009
...Beahahahahaha! Does Thirry have any idea what he's implied he did? Does he care? Oh man, this is SO going to bite him in the butt later, isn't it? hehehe...

Good chapter overall. I can see why Wordy can see hope for a hero in Thirry. A little (okay, rather) ruthless to people he's not in charge of, but given his upbringing it's not surprising, and hey, what hero doesn't have a mean streak?

I have to disapprove of the kidnapping plan though. Really, I thought Thirry had more sense than that. Kidnapping woman on her wedding dayevil. Throwing a kingdom into panicalso evil. Possibly destroying all political implications of a royal weddingvery evil. Marrying someone you (probably) don't knownot so much evil as jerkish and stupid. Really, shotgunning someone into marring you who you (probably) haven't met isn't the best way to have domestic bliss. What if you don't share any interests? Or what if she's a shrew? For grog's sake Thirry, think of your sanity!

Oh, and it will probably bring a butt load of heroes to your door while your still trying to move in and establish order and loyalty in your new home while dealing with Mr. Doomy Liver, but whatever.

Good luck with this semester; I hope your classes are fun. Don't burn yourself out.
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