Very good, the spirit of it is a haiku to me, catching a bittersweet memory as it glides past you,

So sad! :(

But you really get to a person's feelings with this. Well done.

Aw, how sad. You write beautiful poetry. Sorry about the short review, I never know how to write long reviews for a poem. It was really nice though.

Blazn, via the Roadhouse, pay it forward :)

Short but powerful. I've never been good at interpreting poetry that's not mine, but it seems to me that a park, or camp site, or other kind of out door place from your childhood has been chosen as a construction site. I can definitely relate to seeing things from your past knocked down and built over. I liked this one a lot! Good work.

~Reigh~

With Love from the Roadhouse

You have been repaid!

Oh, your poems are incredibly sad, but hauntingly beautiful.

Keep writing, you are amazing, and I am sure you could get these published with ease!

~Star~

Wow. You said a lot with such less words, very emphatic. Very nostalgic, it struck a chord 'cause a lot of things I valued became mere memories...

Silly Silence, this is great! I'm not much for poetry, really, but I love this. So you know that's a compliment of the highest kind. :P

Seriously, this is going in my favorites. You had me from the start, with "ghost-like crumbs." That's my favorite line. - So descriptive and full of depth-and it's only two words!

I think I'd better stop before I start gushing. XD

Heartbreaking. The first stanza is definitely my favorite. The imagery is beautiful and I can definitely relate. Very well done.

beautifully described

i think a more profound title is necessary for a poem like this

This is really good - and sad at the same time. I really like the line 'footprints before the footsteps'

Sadly, I can relate to this poem... too many of the places of my childhood have disappeared beneath new housing developments and the like. Anyway, I love how this poem is written, both the diction and organization. The first stanza is my favorite. Wonderful job.

really good.

I don't understand what it means, but it flows nice!

Nice. I'm normally obsessed with rhymes, but this time I didn't really notice it. There's a good flow to the poem and each stanza forms a separate scene, and they all link in very well - really good imagery. Also, I liked how the pattern stopped at the third stanza and suddenly things moved along.

Anyway, can't exactly think of anything negative to say. So big pat on your back XD

~fleur

i liked this

especially the line

"Footprints before the footsteps"