Reviews for Blues Story
Vivid.Reader chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Hurry up!
NyghtWriter12 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
it is an interesting story. If you continued it I would come back to read it. But you need a lot of work on grammer and spelling. If you wish I could go through the story and make corrections.
Memrat chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
YAY! I love fantasy stories! I can't wait to read the rest. I loved Isabella's background story. I want to know more about the doctor
sootyxsnowpetal chapter 1 . 12/6/2008
Wow. A stranger without a shirt on greets you along with his rugged scar on his back. It would freak me out so much if a gangster looking person suddenly greeted me! xD

I like it! Things turn mysterious with that "What hunter?" "It's a secret" part. I really want to know, so please update! D I'm looking forward to anything you update.

Keep it up! :]
kate7148 chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
I did an in-depth review on TMB so this one will be more overall. .

I think you did a good job with the first chapter, Silver.

If you have time, you should put up a second chapter.

Nice job.
Jenny chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
so far this is a great beginning keep up on updating plz!
Vione chapter 2 . 7/6/2008
Mm.. 'Kay.. This is good.. Though there's still some grammar mistake..

- who was now sitting on her bed with an annoying look in her face.

I think it should be 'annoyed' look

- My mother, knowing that she would not live any longer, wished a friend of her to look after me and died afterwards.

I think it should be 'asked' instead of 'wished'

- I was started to be isolated in a small room when I was five years old,

It should be 'I started'

- , blame me that my disease

should be 'blamed' me

- care of me after my master deceased.

I'm not too sure 'bout this one, but I think it's better 'after the death of my previous master'

- A boy said, he peeked me through the pet door

Should be 'peeking through'

- my voice hoarse because I haven’t spoke for a long time.

Should be 'My voice was hoarse'

- Aiden soon attacked by

Should be 'got attacked'

- Who would thought a tiny weak girl will grow into a tall healthy woman.”

It should be either 'who would have thought' or 'who would think'

I think that's all.. Sorry for the annoying review.. x(

But overall, it's a good start )