|Reviews for By the Light of Day|
| J Severin chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
So his son's also named Isaac?
Cool beginning. I'm interested. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
(The boy was empathetic, he could feel the pain and suffering of others, as well as their joy and angry.)
The last word should be anger.
Aside from that, good grammar and spelling.
| Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
I have to admit, I only read this because the synopsis mentioned 'steampunk' and that's something I live for. . .
Anyway, nice prologue. The little twist at the end was unexpected, but fitting. I'm eager to see where this is headed.
Keep up the good work!