Reviews for Fabricated Bliss |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! Things were going so well, too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting so far. One of the better slash stories I have read lately. The character's motivations seem genuine and you have allowed Lev and Damon to build a relationship as opposed to many stories when the two suddenly just magically are this fate-created-fluffy couple where their personalities are lost. Nicely written, a very comprehensible writing style. Look forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I quite like this story. Passed over it a few times because I thought it would be just another lame guy picks up guy at bar story, but it's not like that at all. Well, a bit, but enough. I'm glad nothing happened between Damon and Lev in this last chapter. I mean, it would totally ruin it if you didn't establish Damon's place as a safe haven, and made it just like every other place. ) Mandraco. P.S. If you want more reviews, you should turn on anonymous ones (login- reviews- anonymous). |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't hate the ending at all! I mean I would have freaked a little if it ended differently. Damon couldn't have just smiled after he kissed him and continued further, that totally is not him. Plus we got a kiss! It's good to know that the pot is on the stove. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG...You've absolutely done it again! FINALLY! I was beginning to wonder when something was going to happen! But you just have such an amazing way of putting these emotions into words, you've really got something special here. Haha! and I'm the pushy bastard friend to anyone who read this and saw any typos, that would be due to me! :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! I was listening to the sad Gravitation Music while I read this. I almost broke into tears when Lev was riding home Damon. But it was so amazing! More amazing than usual! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Lev! Very sad home life! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like your story so far! update soon! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The off chance? It's a big possibility. I know I like Damon because you can tell he is going to be the knight. At least I hope so. But this was a good chapter well worth the wait. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, it's so cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pretty sure that I don't have to to tell you the same thing I always tell you, by now you should know that I love everything you write! AMAZING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say that I really liked the first chapter, and the characters were amusing At first I didn't really like Lev but by the end my heart went out to him~ poor kid . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading the next...update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() looks very promising! i await reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww i love it so far. lev is so cute and damon sounds yummy. please update soon. :) |