|Reviews for Sage|
| imagine everything chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
Make that two readers! Now, I have this strong urge to threaten you to update, but I'll be nice and won't. So, please update soon and make my day. :D
| Red Serpens chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Yeah, it's me again.
Okay-for this story, the plot line and all are fine and dandy, just confused at the place where the chapter started. It was sudden; and kind of confusing. Was there a chapter before this that you neglected/decided not to put in? If so, you might want to alter the beginning slightly so as to let it flow smoother.
I eagerly await the next chapter. D