I liked this story, keep writing other stories! And good job!

dis is toooo GOOD ...! i love it (:

Straight men saying "Tidy up" too good

Cute. Can't wait to read more.

so swet!

Cute story thanks for the pictures helps visualize the story better.

Ohmigosh that was the best cliched story Ive read in months..its so funny and believe it or not Ive actually seen something almost exactly like this happen to a few of my friends before except they werent a jock & cheerleader...ur story may seem unrealistic to you, but it was realistic to me, so Kudos on a story well written!

I think it would be really interesting to add jensen's point of view on the last chapter/epilogue. I mean, it is him telling her, so it would be really cool to see what's going through his head.

I really liked the whole thing... the last part was more cliche than any other part... but i still liked it. :) Good job.

Hey... Ok, um... not trying to sound too critical, but... if you use the word definitely... spell it correctly... instead of defiantly.

I loved this soo much :)

Really cute story.

Great story! I would've liked to hear her say it back, but it was a really great story! Great job!

The story was cute. I like Gwen a lot, but I honestly think this story went by way too fast.

Need to check your spelling and grammer.

I do hope you post another chapter to this story in which she also tells him that she loves him.

that was so cute! i loved it!