Reviews for Cooking
J.N. Lloyd chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
This was a very nice, short poem. the imagery was well used and your style was very humorous and delightful! Keep writing!
Seven Rose chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
I almost forgot what the poem was about until read the title again.

Because in the beginning, if you forget the title you can think of prehistoric things and the meteor taking the dinosaurs away...or maybe thats just me. haha.

detail good...well written!
DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
haha, i like this, it shows how we as authors get these ideas, but just as we figure out how to write it or word or or whatever it is...something gets in the way and we cant

i think that the wording and the format are both good, however in my personal opinion, i dont like the word Eureka in there and I would take it out, but the flow is good, the lines breaks are great, even the punctuation is fine! it's rare that i come across poems with practically no errors whatsoever

good write ]