"She new she should be happy" [new replaced by knew]

"25 now start acting like it." [spell out 25 - twenty-five]

This kind of a situation is easy to relate to, I guess - I like the emotions portrayed by the protagonist in the beginning and generally throughout this entire thing! It has a tone of humor, which is really nice. Great work!

x mandy

Could you payback via The Mathews Scenario? Thanks! :)

Hey. Thanks for the review. I must say, I am not a huge romance fan; however, this did keep my attention. I really enjoyed the heavy use of dialogue. I felt that you were able to establish a solid setting and plot with very little narration-not an easy task. You should try to update it one of these days.

hey! this is a really great story. i want to see how this little romance progresses...and i want to see him go through the taylor test. please write more!

I can completely relate to her about the birthday, except no got engaged, they just forgot. Oh well. I like the story so far. Update soon.