Reviews for falling
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
I have to agree with Sara (of course) in that the rhythm is fantastic. It has this very raw feeling to it, like a rant put into poetry form (something I'm way too familiar with lately). Beautiful work. Keep writing! :)
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
but the poem spoke to me like it was written about me

and of course it wasn't

but i think that says a lot about it

the rhythm is fantastic

:) yay
Isca chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
"The drop down is your redemption." I have chills...

"A ten year old is on her knees and prays to her god who you don't believe in." WOW!

This was so raw and emotional. Amazing piece! :)