Reviews for falling |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have to agree with Sara (of course) in that the rhythm is fantastic. It has this very raw feeling to it, like a rant put into poetry form (something I'm way too familiar with lately). Beautiful work. Keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() but the poem spoke to me like it was written about me and of course it wasn't but i think that says a lot about it the rhythm is fantastic :) yay |
![]() ![]() ![]() "The drop down is your redemption." I have chills... "A ten year old is on her knees and prays to her god who you don't believe in." WOW! This was so raw and emotional. Amazing piece! :) |