Reviews for Red Lights
OoohLookACat chapter 4 . 7/23/2008
ooh a mysterious phone call

very very interesting


you know someone who's garden was used in the film?


hahahaha and estelle!

that's even cooler!

...well i do like hugh a little better haha

but that's not the point

poppy has skills and secrets.

which intrigues me

and that means that i'll definitely be waiting for the next chapter

instead of studying haha

BeingMyself chapter 3 . 7/21/2008
She has a fedora! Wow, she's my idol, aha.
WriterGurl123 chapter 3 . 7/21/2008
No it wasn't a bit boring, I thought it was nice. I just don't get why Poppy and Mason aren't really talking. I don't know if maybe she's just different than all of the people he's met so far, but I think she's pretty cool. Maybe I'll find out in the next chapter.

Love it though!
Ashlyn chapter 3 . 7/21/2008
Yeah, I know EXACTLY what you mean about first few chapters.

I liked this chapter too, especially Poppy trying to convince Mason to try her tea.

I absolutely love tea... I like green tea, but everybody else finds it disgusting. Haha.

Anyway, hope you have a great day! Can't wait for the next chapter!
HeartOfTheBarrierSnow chapter 3 . 7/21/2008

Wahey, i forgot this was set in good old England! With our beloved tea.. and not just any old part of england but Landon! I am in Highbury at this very moment!

Anyway, no leftie papers? Although you are right, the daily mail is pretty funny...

although i confess ive never been to Koko (but i have just been told that i have to go while im down here)

but as usual, i loved this chapter of your writing, and cant wait for the next one!
OoohLookACat chapter 3 . 7/20/2008
well it was a very nice chapter

not only is poppy sarcastic and slightly annoyed with her friends

but she is an excellent tea master and a saturday morning tennis player.

way too many things hahaha

but i love her already

and she seems very fun

number 27 bus huh

next time i'm in london - i'll go through there

try and find the places where hugh grant actually stood in notting hill

haha that's very tourist-y and sad of me.

hmm oh well haha

can't wait for more

though not very eventful

it was enjoyable

BeingMyself chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
Ok, I'm Canadian so if I was in Mason's place and heard some guy say he was going to have a fag, I'd laugh. I know it means cigarette and all, but still!
Holiday in Spain chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
I like it. It's really good.
OoohLookACat chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
oh poppy is brilliant!

i love her already and its only the second chapter

so you're obviously doing very well

and wow

that bit about why they're her friends

ive know what thats like

and i love poppy's lines

"just think about your pretty hair."

god that is genius

i love it

it made me laugh so hard i almost spat out my food

and good impressions - hilarious that last line

loved it

can't wait for more

Ashlyn chapter 2 . 7/14/2008
Hey :)

I love Poppy. Her narration and dialogue make me laugh. She actually reminds me of my friend a little bit. And Mason seems like an interesting character.

It was a good chapter. Not a whole lot of stuff happened, but you managed to make it interesting with further development of characters.

When I write, I usually find those first few chapters hardest to write. They can be so frustrating sometimes. But, you did a good job :)

I'm interested in where this story will go.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
HeartOfTheBarrierSnow chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
i really like this chapter, you really get a sense of depth to the story...

I hope you update soon!
WriterGurl123 chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
That's definitely a great way to make an impression. She's got such a potty mouth and now since Mason mentioned it, I'd really like to know why her so called "Friends" are being jackasses to her. There's a story to that, and I'm quite interested in it.

Anyways, Love the story!
sunflower.kiss chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
Haha, it was a little confusing, but I really enjoyed it! Funny ] Update more!
SugarRachLeonard chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
haha this is good!

it made me laugh alot

and i like how poppy always notices their hair first haha

update soon!
Koki Enwai chapter 2 . 7/13/2008
Oh, still going strong. Really nice. I'm anticipating more!

- Koki
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