Reviews for Red Lights
OoohLookACat chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
well its lucky you got the chance to write it

because i got the chance to love it instantly

its addictive

and hilarious

and poppy makes me laugh

and mason is mysterious

and obviously he's there for a reason other than a holiday

because there's no way you'd be mysterious if you were there for a holiday

...well you might but thats not the point

i love it

and i'm waiting for more

and i can't wait for more

izzie
WriterGurl123 chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Are AS exams likes SAT's here in the states which determine if you can get into college or not?

Anyways, her dad did a good job of telling her that Mason was going to be there for a long time. I'm quite interested in reading about her reaction once he starts to get on her nerves.

Love it!
Ashlyn chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Hey.

I loved this. It was a good start... Most of the stories I read here on FictionPress start with "OMG he was so hott but he was arrogant... blah blah." And this story had a different, more natural feel to it.

So I'm definitely gonna keep reading it! :)
HeartOfTheBarrierSnow chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
does your school get to go home sooner if they have finished AS exams? psh we dont.. we only get that at GCSE and A2...

sorry, i dont know why you needed to know that...

but this seems to have a really strong start, and i cant wait to see the next chapter!
in.the.wardrobe chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
hey, good start. very interesting. poppy is a funny character, i loved her dialogue :) not much said of mason yet, but that's a good thing, leaving the first chapter for the main character. i can't wait for more!
Koki Enwai chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Definitely a good start; I love the narration and am looking forward to reading more!

- Koki
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